Reviews for Their Room |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I am a French reader And big fan of Dramione. I love it so much that I start reading English fanfiction of that ship. I read the review for your story, there are so enthrilled by your story but I am disturbed by the form of the chapter. Every lines is stick together, there is no paragraph. No space between the line, it make the task of reading it too complicated for me.. English is not my mother tongue (obviously |
![]() ![]() To be honest I've never read Harry potter's books I just watched the movies but I love this fanfiction more than the movies! This story was more than a parfect and I ship Hermione and Draco more than with Ron (soory Ron) In the end I wanna say that this fanfiction was parfect and I loved it so much ️️️️️️️️️️️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely phenomenal character development, one of the best Dramione FanFiction’s I’ve ever read! I’ll definitely be reading more of your stories. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() To respond there was a few typos, but hey! This story was very well done, an interesting and realistic take. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yep, definitely a pillock! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. The characterisation is spot-on... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such an original aspect... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great, a realistic start for their characters... |
![]() ![]() I'm SO EXTREMELY sorry that i haven't reviewed yet. I just haven't been able to pull myself away from it long enough! The guilt however has becone too much. I can no longer continue to read your Amazing story without letting you know what a Talented writer you are. I've been reading dramione fanfiction for over 15 years and this is one of the most realistic ones I've ever read. One suggestion tho? I personally feel like the flow of the story would be nicer if you did something to show the change of scene. It always take me a secons or two to figure out what is going on if the story changes scenes one paragraph to the next without anything to mark the change. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Their Room By: aleximoon Translator: /moonug2/ Hello, As I'd told you I love your Dm/Hg fictions, I would like to share one of your wonderful stories with some of Dm/Hg lovers in Thailand by translating ' Their Room ' in Thai and post it to one of Thai fansites. Although my English is not good but I will do my best if you say Yes. Looking forward to your reply, and thank you. moonug2 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed these past few days reading such a wonderfully put story, so for you I have but Two words Thank you |
![]() ![]() well, this story was created a year before I was born but so far so good lol. :) |
![]() ![]() So did you do a sequel? I need to know please |
![]() ![]() No idea why Hermione would think Hogwarts to be one of the safest places in England, when Hogwarts is located in Scotland. Don't take our Harry Potter Heritage from us. |