Hmmmmmm blissful sleep!
Omg I just fucking threw up!
Oh I'm so cozy with this whore wrapped around me...hmmmm snugglemsnuggle...puke

Of course I think better of you now Edward! Because you magically became...not a whore!
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He's a whore, plain and fucking simple...he cantnchange that...once a whore ALWAYS a whore! He can't undo allnthose girls...and Bella's just over looking it? WHY?HOW?

Wow a loose turkey...so not even funny...and Bella being all shocked ...a secret society? Omg like there was no clues...I had no idea! LA gasp! So fucking stupid

Wait...what! Now Bella doesntnthink Edwards the town bike? Why cause she wants her turn now? Gross

Funny how this secret society is supposed to be intriguing...but its not, cause its so fucking obvious

Funny huh? Edward thought e was drugged and yet...didn't take her to the fucking hospital!,,,,!,,,!

You didn't have to make it sooooo fucking obvious with the drink! I took a drink...I kept unconsiencely taking drinks from my cup...?
And making the whore her little savior? Fucking stupid. So what if Edward doesn't rape her while she's sleeping it means he's a good guy and not a used up whore? Fuck that

That didn't even make sense! How the fuck did she start a fire lighting a candle? She's lighting a candle...so how does a post it pad catch fire?
This is dumb as fuck

I just lost all respect for Bella, a manwhore pulls her chair out for her and she thinks, oh I didn't know such gentleman existed in the world...not a gentleman Bella...A WHORE!
Get the fuck away from Edward!

This kinda reads wrong...Bella says then we both laughed...and I'm left thinking WHy? Nothing was fucking funny!

For all theyelling bella did she sure didnt ge her point across did she?
She's tells him he's gross and he just smiles and laughs! Wtf? Then two seconds later she's saying sweet dreams to the used upnwhore? No fucking thank you...he's either gross or he's not and what's with all e bulllshit talk about love?he's still a WHORE

If he's actually kissing and or fucking all these girls that's not fucking flirting Alice!

This is my fourth time reading this story. I absolutely LOVE it! When I went to college, I rallied with the students and board to have what I called a "Knightly league" in honor of your "Twilight league." Much of the same principles and rules.
I just LOVE LOVE LOVE this fanfic so much! Thank you for writing it.

I just read chapter 33, where Bella goes to the burial site, and it struck me so. As someone who lost their mother, I just wanted you to know that you wrote it perfectly. It made me. Ry.

So wordy and it went no where. I'm prety sure Alice, Rose, and all the others didn't put this much thought and crazy anxiety into the pledge! Why make Bella so unsure