Reviews for Snape's dilemmas
0tree0 chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
Firstly, i love the story, your style is awesome and you capture the characters really well. There are some translation errors but not so many as to distract the determined reader. If you want to make sure your story is completely accurate you could always ask for a beta, considering how good the story is, you should have no problem. What is your first language by the way?

I hope you continue to write, your writing is very good. Good luck with any future projects (whatever the language)!
Erik's Rose chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Aw bless! This is dead sweet, thanks I really enjoyed it

Kindest Regards

ER
fallenfromgrace17 chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Aw... So sweet. Who knew Lupin cared so much about Snape?
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
Neat! Only one thing-whenever there is a new speaker, you need to have a new paragraph. That would help.

Anyway, good story.