|Reviews for Disgust|
| NearlyGenius chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
...I like Lily. Didn't Jo say she was popular, though? Writers Rights, I s'pose.
| Anomalous Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
I liked it. It was new, fresh. Great job!
| Glorious Clio chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Hmm... interesting concept. I liked it. And you're right, it is an accurate picture of "popularity" at that age. Good job, I imagine this was a very difficult piece to write, given how many readers love her.
| Prieda Solo chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
nice! And kudos for managing to make it believable without getting too author!ranty. good job.
Interesting look at lily's character as well. I'm not too sure how I feel about Lily myself, I'm still reeling a bit from Snape's Worst Memory. The bit where her childhood friend is being bullied, angrily snaps at her, and she reacts by...walking off.
Seriously. I mean, in a comparible situation if one of my friends was being bullied by my boyfriend (which is so unlike my bf it's not even funny), I interviened, and he snapped something hurtful at me, I wouldn't walk away from him. Lily is a prefect for crissakes, why does she not go to get a teacher? Why does she try to handle it herself then slide off when she's failed?
Anyway *ahem* that's my little rant over. :) Very well written, good job.
| EmeraldEyez1728 chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
This is an interesting take on Lily. I've never thought of the situation like that before-I always took the stereotypical, "oh everyone must love her" route and left it like that but you've made me think about it. The way you depicted this character's feelings just made it so real and plausible. I particularly liked the part about her breaking the original James Potter. I don't think it was entirely fair of Lily to force James to change. Well done. There weren't any spelling or grammer errors as far as I could tell and it was written extremely well.