Reviews for Lost Consciousness
ThreeGoodReasons chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
What?! They could still be alive in there, so why don't I start a fire?!
Tairulz chapter 13 . 9/7/2013
Wow nice story :D
RainFlame chapter 12 . 6/10/2013
Sorry to see it end :( Really, overall, excellent work! Loved where you took this C:
RainFlame chapter 11 . 6/10/2013
Ed has such a hard time . . . poor kid can't catch a break :(
RainFlame chapter 10 . 6/10/2013
Good to see Ed flat ignoring orders again As he should be xD
RainFlame chapter 9 . 6/10/2013
Oh, Mustang . . . that could have been a mistake :/
RainFlame chapter 8 . 6/10/2013
It may have been a bit OOC, but it was precious nonetheless C':
RainFlame chapter 7 . 6/10/2013
Hahaha aww, Winry being gentle . . . who knew? xD
RainFlame chapter 6 . 6/10/2013
Gah, Ed missing his tune-ups! Figures lol xD What's Winry going to think? D:

I'm sure this finds you with your district band tryouts over, but I'm sure you did well!
RainFlame chapter 5 . 6/10/2013

Mustang really slides right into that parental role easily, doesn't he? I would have thought he'd fought it a bit more, but Ed isn't exactly acting like Ed anymore, so maybe that helps him? XD
RainFlame chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
Yes, Parental!Roy is the very best xD

Wonderful chapter! Again, poor Ed :C But at least he's got Mustang C:
RainFlame chapter 3 . 6/10/2013
Haha don't hate this chapter! I enjoyed it, especially the brotherly fluff at the end C: Al's such a good sibling.
RainFlame chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
Poor poor Ed :C Did he lose ALL of his memory? D: Even about his own brother? Poor kid, and poor Al :(
RainFlame chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
GAH! Suspense!

Everything happens to the Elrics. Must be a rule of fan fiction xD

I am curious, though; why did Mustang torch the bottom of the building? Is this some method of controlling the collapse? I know nothing of things like that, so was just curious!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/26/2013
At this moment hating you with a passion
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