Reviews for Time Unravels
Li chapter 11 . 10/23/2017
I wonder if sasuke will tell his parents about the massacre
Li chapter 6 . 10/23/2017
Li chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
Lindt Luirae chapter 27 . 9/5/2017
Aw I want more of this!
Lindt Luirae chapter 25 . 9/5/2017
I love that Gaara is there! Yay
Lindt Luirae chapter 15 . 9/4/2017
Hahahahahaha that was great!
Lindt Luirae chapter 11 . 9/4/2017
Aw I wanted more insight on Sasuke meeting Itachi as a baby, like a role reversal or something
Lindt Luirae chapter 8 . 9/4/2017
Although this story is a little fast paced and slightly on the silly interactions side for my tastes, I really like where the plot is going. It's a fun read rather than a serious one and sometimes that's exactly what you need.

Little bit of advice though, Minato is really smart, I don't think he'd fall for 'I'm his uncle' lie. And the interactions between Naruto and Sasuke... hmm, I feel like Sasuke sounds a little bit like— well, Naruto actually and sometimes even like Sakura, which is slightly out of character but not a major problem.
my 2 guys chapter 27 . 8/11/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
xXGod707Xx chapter 25 . 6/30/2017
valkyriefyre79 chapter 1 . 3/19/2017
I love that you have all of Team 7 here, including Sai and Tenzo. There aren't enough fics out there that have all six of them, so I thank you for writing this.
Maxinea chapter 27 . 1/23/2017
Nd eventually, I'll have to wait again... Ja ne! Keep up with the amazing story!
Maxine chapter 26 . 1/23/2017
Aahhh! So surprising!
Maxine chapter 16 . 1/23/2017
Where in the world is Kushina!?
Maxine chapter 11 . 1/23/2017
All I can say is... Kyaaaaaaaahhhhh!
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