Reviews for The Broken Heart
Guest chapter 7 . 8/9/2014
Chapter 7 and 6 are the same
Guest chapter 6 . 9/23/2012
Have you seen Charmed? Because you know... telekinesis and then freeze time & blow things up. :) Love that show 3
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 27 . 8/28/2012
Great story! I'm glad it was edited.
There were a few spelling mistakes still
you wrote the wrong wirds sometimes... I don't know how to explain it...
you could fix these things if you either got a beta or edited it yourself.
I loved the storyline. I haven't read anything like it before.
Keep up the great work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Guest chapter 23 . 7/13/2012
i loved the story but i think it ended too fast but other than that it was awesome
AliceCullen0629 chapter 27 . 3/26/2012
good story
Alina bee chapter 14 . 2/16/2011
im confused...what is up with the 2 belaa POV
xxxLauraaxxx chapter 27 . 12/8/2009
Heyy this story is awesom

can u plz write something else on that topic

thnx from lauraa
K Krystine chapter 2 . 11/30/2009
LOVED THE STORY!
Justchillingandliving chapter 27 . 9/19/2009
great for you hope you like it

love it i love the writing you did loved it loved it love it

please please please please please please please please please please get some more up soon

love babykool12
snuggalong chapter 7 . 8/12/2009
Why are chapter's six and seven exactly the same...?
andsarah chapter 7 . 7/13/2009
I am guessing that Lauren, controlled edwards mind to marry her :) Im going to finish now :D
precious pixie chapter 7 . 5/12/2009
you got the powers from charmed right? but it's good, I like the story so far.
philodice chapter 12 . 4/30/2009
POV switching constantly...Lame.

Over use of the word boring makes the story boring.

Much love.
Philodice chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
I like the way this is starting out.
JessieIero chapter 24 . 4/23/2009
wait one sec so Lauren could control peoples minds and change her apperance,and she was using spells?,

from jessie
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