Reviews for Why
blackcat-chan chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
I am liking it so far...
blackcat-chan chapter 4 . 4/3/2008
This is really good so far my friend, I'll keep reading it...Like how you put you in it!...
Ashley Sensie chapter 3 . 3/12/2008
awsome story
Neji's-Fanboy chapter 3 . 3/12/2008
Update now! This is a very good story for a first story.


By the way - RUMP ROAST
otterlily chapter 3 . 3/11/2008
Thanks! You're the first person to ever comment on a story of mine!
YaoiRocks chapter 3 . 3/10/2008
meww~ poor Sasori no Danna .

Any chance of an update soon?


~Peace out and Yaoi for all~
YaoiRocks chapter 2 . 3/10/2008
o.O le gaspeth . poor Sasori no Danna .

This your first fanfic? mm~ quite good for your first one, although in the first chapter I got a bit lost, but am with it now. At least I think I am XD

You have good potential X3 I'll keep an eye on this fic to see how it turns out and give you any suggestions on how to improve if I see anything. Your level of detail is good so thats no problem and your grammar is good as well. It was just the plot line that confused me a bit in the first chapter .

Well hope to see another chapter soon~ good luck X3


~Peace out and Yaoi for all~