|Reviews for Roundabout|
| Elivra26 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
This was hilarious! Now I can't decide who's more scary -Raven or Starfire! Good job!
| Kist chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Bwahaha! That is awesome!
| Liesie chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Best Tamaranean bedtime story every. Eat your heart out, Brothers Grimm. Are there braxla-eating wild animals in Rumplestiltskin? I think not.
| Saint H chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Lol, little protective, Star?
Nice, I do like the way you managed Star's use of language. Although my favorite line was probably "Star, do you want me to explain what a question is again?"
| SylverEyes chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
That was one of the oddest yet most hilarious things that I've read in a while. Really good creativity. Starfire's story was amazing, although I fail to see how they could find it a good story to tell to their children at bedtime.
Thrown on a spike... XD
Star has a very roundabout way of getting to things doesn't she? Hm, well actually, most of the time she gets straight to the point. Perhaps when it comes to her feelings she takes the long way around. How very human of her.
I would pay to see the look on Raven's face at the very end of this. I'm sure it would make me crack up. Nice job.
| My-Sanity-Went-B00m chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
I love starfire. She has such a nice way of putting things. And it was such a nice story too, No wonder they tell it to little children at night. XD
| bbissocute chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
This is cute! Very nice job with Star. I love the story. -snicker-
| alibi2014 chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
This made me smile. I loved Raven asking, “Star, do you want me to explain what a question is again?” And just imagining Starfire asking Raven, "?” with the same innocent smile she always has is so funny. Very cute.
P.S. I love your penname! The New Pornographers are amazing. "Streets of Fire" and "Go Places" are some of my favorite songs of theirs, too.
| XxNightfirexX chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
That was SO funny!
| AlsoSprachOdin chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Good one! Really nice underlying threat when you think there was no point with Star's little story.
“?” [genuine LOL]
Though, instead of “Oh. Lord.”, Raven should probably have said Azar or something like that. Not that it matters.
| Harry Potter Fan 1994 chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
That was hilarious, I loved it! *Favoriting*