Reviews for Fate Future Reality
mangafreak7793 chapter 5 . 12/11/2007
funny omake
Lizard Valis chapter 5 . 12/11/2007
Can you explain how many Carens are there in the fic? Your confusing me _ .
Lizard Valis chapter 4 . 12/6/2007
A split path like in the game? Please do and will somebody please do a fan Fate game based on this? Continue if you have the time.
evil-kenshin chapter 3 . 11/21/2007
Great story :)

this counts for chapter 4 aswell (being that i reviewed it when ch.3 was accidentally uploaded a 2nd time i can't review it again)
evil-kenshin chapter 4 . 11/20/2007
great story but you accidentally uploaded the 3rd chapter twice (chapter 3 & 4 are both the same)
Knjaz chapter 3 . 11/13/2007
LOVE you!really really love.

слов не хватает!)
Lizard Valis chapter 3 . 11/12/2007
Ah what of ninth servant? But isn't he well you know If you've played/ Red Fate/ hollow ataraxia.
seirahErinyes chapter 3 . 11/12/2007
Nice chapie! Like the battle scenes...

update very soon, can't wait what happens nexT!
seirahErinyes chapter 2 . 11/9/2007
Nxt chapter please... and I'm still confused how d servents came into the story!

Nice job!
deota chapter 2 . 11/7/2007
Yay I got mentioned for helpin have A question did Dark Saber appear from Saber's shadow, or from out of nowhere. Anyway like the chapter, can;t wait to read more, O n Also I like your fic Project PYE too, but i'm too lazy to review it ATM so plz count this as a double review D
Lizard Valis chapter 2 . 11/7/2007
All right, some action and this stays true (I think) to the Fate universe but who are going to be the servants?
mangafreak7793 chapter 2 . 11/7/2007
really good
Rockomaniac chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
That is a good i believe that you could improve on the fluency of the language more. You must understand a story requires momentum. It can create emotion in the reader and bring out things that are harderto express with vocabulary sometimes.

Anyway, i will be waiting for the next chapter!

Yours faithfully,

Rockomaniac
deota chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Like the chapter it seems good, but 1 thing,the Person from CardCaptor Sakura's name is not Ariel, it's Eriol, Ariel is girl's name...
mangafreak7793 chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
nice chapter
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