I'm glad Lothiriel got mad and decided to fight instead of getting depressed and giving herself up.

:) You build up the anticipation and climax very well. It seems I have to keep reading and reading and reading. No place for a breather now.

Lothiriel is wonderfully human. :)

I'm actually excited.

I'm actually a bit relieved Bergit died. Though I did like her very much.

I'm hooked. Is it the hobbits already?

I hope you make Umar pay further along. He is pure evil it seems.

This is getting serious. I'm scared that something bad will happen to Bergit. She seems one of those characters that get sacrificed.

I hope you make Eomer pay for that night. Things like that cannot happen without affecting the soul.
I like the wedding. It sounded absolutely lovely.

Horses seem to be important to both Lothiriel and Eomer. This part of the story is fun.

I'm just relieved there now appears to be as slight reprieve in the story.

I love the conversation here between Lothiriel and Gandalf.
This passage really high lights Eomer's leadership and skill with people.

Gandalf is always wonderful and such a comfort to have around. I think you wrote very well his mysterious and wandering way of talking.

Cutting off before we find out how things went for Lothiriel is a brilliant move. :)

Eomer's problem sounds worse than Lothiriel's. She can hide away and none will question her, finally becoming a lady, but Eomer will have to deal with his own judgement of his feelings.