Reviews for Tide of Destiny Part One: Choices
Anon chapter 16 . 1/27/2014
I'm glad Lothiriel got mad and decided to fight instead of getting depressed and giving herself up.
Anon chapter 15 . 1/27/2014
:) You build up the anticipation and climax very well. It seems I have to keep reading and reading and reading. No place for a breather now.
Anon chapter 14 . 1/27/2014
Lothiriel is wonderfully human. :)
Anon chapter 13 . 1/27/2014
I'm actually excited.
Anon chapter 12 . 1/27/2014
I'm actually a bit relieved Bergit died. Though I did like her very much.
Anon chapter 11 . 1/27/2014
I'm hooked. Is it the hobbits already?
Anon chapter 10 . 1/27/2014
I hope you make Umar pay further along. He is pure evil it seems.
Anon chapter 9 . 1/27/2014
This is getting serious. I'm scared that something bad will happen to Bergit. She seems one of those characters that get sacrificed.
Anon chapter 8 . 1/27/2014
I hope you make Eomer pay for that night. Things like that cannot happen without affecting the soul.
I like the wedding. It sounded absolutely lovely.
Anon chapter 7 . 1/27/2014
Horses seem to be important to both Lothiriel and Eomer. This part of the story is fun.
Anon chapter 6 . 1/27/2014
I'm just relieved there now appears to be as slight reprieve in the story.
Anon chapter 5 . 1/27/2014
I love the conversation here between Lothiriel and Gandalf.
This passage really high lights Eomer's leadership and skill with people.
Anon chapter 4 . 1/27/2014
Gandalf is always wonderful and such a comfort to have around. I think you wrote very well his mysterious and wandering way of talking.
Anon chapter 3 . 1/27/2014
Cutting off before we find out how things went for Lothiriel is a brilliant move. :)
Anon chapter 2 . 1/27/2014
Eomer's problem sounds worse than Lothiriel's. She can hide away and none will question her, finally becoming a lady, but Eomer will have to deal with his own judgement of his feelings.
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