Reviews for Not Falling Apart
peytonslucas chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
I'm reading this for the third time! Thank you for writing such an amazing story 3
svety74 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
I like one thing. I'm a huge LP fan. They are my OTP & I love everything about them. But what I love from what I read is the friendship between Peyton/Nathan. I always liked it on the show especially in S2/S3 but suddenly the writers decided to give it up in S5/S6 and they had hardly any scenes. And I really missed their friendship.
guest chapter 24 . 9/25/2010
Wonderful, this is an amazing story
Dane2605 chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Sorry - I just realised an error in my review. So im reposting it below - cuz I don't write anything but have great admiration for those who does...

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Hi...

I know this is late but i'm new to reading these fics.

But I have en single comment to this chapter...

YOU write Peyton hates clowns - but thats actually Haley...

I only write this because you otherwise is very much in touch with the characters.

Anyway I will now return to your story ;-)
Dane2605 chapter 14 . 3/10/2010
Hi...

I know this is late but i'm new to reading these fics.

But I have en single comment to this chapter...

I write Peyton hates clowns - but thats actually Haley...

I only write this because you otherwise is very much in touch with the characters.

Anyway I will now return to your story ;-)
redguitar chapter 37 . 2/14/2010
REALLY REALLY GOOD! i love this but i still dont like brooke and jake together i like her with chase. but LOVE the LEYTON scenes/stories such a different great idea!
Little Green Bird chapter 37 . 1/16/2010
I believe this has been the second time I've read this story except I've never reviewed. I've got to say, this is one of the best written story that deals with "what could have been" during that summer. Especially a story with a pregnancy storyline-you handled it really well and made it very very original. That's not an easy thing to do, especially when you keep certain aspects of the show, yet insert subtle changes to fit your own vision. I love it all!

Out of curiosity, did you ever write the sequel you planned for this? I skimmed through your stories and didn't find one...
Genstarsmallpot92 chapter 37 . 9/7/2009
Thankyou for an amazing read...and also for the sequel :P
xxcrimsonorchidxx chapter 37 . 1/22/2009
This story was amazing. Loved the twists and turns. And the lyrics you chose for each chapter were perfect. Thanks for sharing.
LucaslovesPeyton chapter 37 . 6/28/2008
Wow I have to say your story made me laugh, cry and just wow, it was great. Loved it! I don't like Brooke on the show, but I loved her in your story with Jake. Great Job!
LucaslovesPeyton chapter 4 . 6/25/2008
I just started reading this I'm on Chapter 4 and seriously I can't put it down. I know the show didn't happen this way, but honestly so far I like this better then the show. GOOD JOB
thepurpleguitar chapter 37 . 5/18/2008
I loved reading this story, you have great talent! Hopefully I'll read more coming from you!
SimplyKorra chapter 25 . 5/10/2008
this story is very well done, I'm just reading through it now but you tie the season 3/4 story with your own twist seamlessly. I'll drop a few more reviews as I go along. Awesome stuff.
Stunna21 chapter 37 . 4/19/2008
this is amazing so far and i will read the sequel to see the answer and update soon because this is great.
GGashleighOTH chapter 37 . 2/21/2008
Wow i just fell in love with this story and have been reading it non-stop! I can't wait to start reading the sequel. Great Writing :D
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