|Reviews for Moonless Night|
| AdiaSkyFire chapter 1 . 12/28/2016
Ok ok, it took me a while, but here I am, keeping my promise. I know how it feels to receive a review, and for that, I like to write them.
First I must give you a standing ovation. I've never seen a MKR story with so many favorites! I cannot say I'm not jealous.
About the story, there are many things that I love. But above all there is one that stands out and is all about Lantis’ feels (which don't reach Hikaru's ears). With those two it's always the same: Hikaru is always wondering about the things she had said or done and Lantis leaving her out about ALL the real feelings that she is provoking on him. In this case, fantasies that he considers inappropriate for her.
I highlight certain formulas, which I love. 1. "only the pillar knew" as a Cefirian saying that everyone used back in a day. 2. Lantis' monologue trying to dissuade himself, trying to convince himself he is stronger than that fire that is about to ignite in his soul (And body) 3. "..sleeping together ..." words said by Hikaru, and then she realizes that sounds rather compromising. You know my opinion about manga. I am convinced that manga-Hikaru would not even realize the double meaning. That's why I'm pleased that the Hikaru you're portraying here, blushed at the thought that he's sleeping with Lantis, even if she does’nt realize what she's provoking to his beloved. 4."Lantis smelled like leather ..." is wonderful to find within a fic a reference to the sense of smell. I do not see it normally, even I tend to forget it, because I'm always concentrating on the description of other things. Reading it here is refreshing because it makes you think how delicious it must feel to be near him. 5. I do not go unnoticed by the name of the pillar "Selenity" I imagine you wanted to make a SM reference?. 6. Describe a jealous Lantis. Yes, for me it is also a headcanon that his protective instinct from time to time becomes troublesome and… jealous. I imagine him sending glacial glances and standing in the way of those who dare to look at his little redhead.
As a final note: he has to "wait" for her to be 18. Well, I have my own headcanon about that, but I wanted to mention that I read a fic (and I do not even remember the name! shame of me) where my poor Lantis was subdued to that kind of waiting for several years and added to other traumas,he ended up creating an entity, similar to what was Nova to Hikaru. I remember and it makes me laugh. My poor Lantis.
Nice reading, I like the style. And I enjoyed a lot. Congrats
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
you should write more. you write well. i like your works . most esp. if its hikaru and lantis. thanks for a wonderful fic.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
Woooooow ! I looooooove lantis and hikaru and this fic is GREEEEEAAAT -
| moon730 chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
awwwwwww I loved it
| Deathgirl66 chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
I loved your story :)
| kana chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
I don't know why I never spent time reading fanfics from this fandom! I hope you didn't stop writing. But if you did, what would you want me to get you, to make you write again? xD
| Taly-chan chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Lol, Lantis thinking waiting two years sounded impossible, lol. And "Spill"! I have a dirty, dirty mind, but for a second I though Lantis would choke, and then nope, he just didn't get the expression. Maybe. Lol. Great oneshot
| Lady of the Shards chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
| midnightblue08 chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
sequel perhaps? hehehe
i love the cuddling part!
| tsukuyomi.sakurachi chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
_ This is cute1 Please write more drabbles! _
| yr1104 chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
I definitely like this one shot and hope you make another of her torturing him.
| Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
That was so awesome.. and cute. Two more years.. do they still keep up with legality over at Cephiro? I mean, age shouldn't matter considering people can actually live there forever and all.. XP
| Haine-of-Winter chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Aww, poor Lantis~ he has to resist a lot of temptation when it comes to Hikaru. Only two more years and he'll be finally free from the excruciating torture. ;)
| buzzliza chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
i LOVE this story . Lantis is so sweet, he so cute :) He matches with hikaru so well .
| SanctumAsylum chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
I would hope there isn't a sword over my head. But as I feel the manifestation of one...I loved it! So cute! I adore your Rayearth stories :]