Wow. This is nice actually. Perfect story. Got me totally puzzled in so many parts but mostly satisfied with the outcomes.

How are you so talented? I like how every character is involved in the story. It was as if all of them are so important. And I definitely love how you potray each of them. How you design each of their charater and role in the story. That was fantastic.

This story made me cry, and laugh, and smile to myself. The plotline itself is already so complicated and with the way you write it, just perfect. I wish this story is more than a fanfiction. So emotional and absorbing.

And I wish I could write like you.

Whoa, didn't see that one coming. YIKES!

Ah! I just started reading this and the premise is killer! Must sleep... or read...

Reading wins every time.

awesome story very emotional you put alot things together this has to be one of top emotional storys i have read

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You are simply amazing... It really seems like you're actually telling us their story, like it actually happened, for it's so creible. The emotions and events are so strong and well written it feels you can almost touch them. Thank you, for making this story reach our imagination!

I've taken a very - very - long hiatus from writing fanfiction, but have finally decided to get back to it. While looking through my old works I found links to various other works, including this one. I remember reading this years ago and absolutely loving it. I'm re-reading it now as if for the first time. Still loving it. Just thought I'd give a quick shout since I didn't back then. Amazing stuff! :)

Although I liked the original ending better I personally liked the epilogue. Brought some closure to some things. Knowing rinoa still has to live as "someone else" the person she "murdered" sucks but it brought some sense of realality to their situation. It's easier to believe the story in the book rather than the true story. All in all I absolutely loved the fic. You are talent beyond words. I cannot wait to start up on another one of you're epic stories. I know I won't put it down when I do.

So it begins with a yes and ends with a no. Once again clever.

And u bounced a spell from 2 years ago to the present. I did not see that coming. I for sure thought it was over.

This is an amazing story. About to read final chap now.

BTW while I don't remember the time or can't even imagine the pain my wife went through. The one thing I do remember is her almost dislocating my fingers. Worth it both times though.

I knew it was too easy... Well that wasn't particularly easy but u get were I'm going. Time for the epic conclusion

This moment could really suck for rin

Lionheart nooo squall don't do it.

Who ever this chick is has to be ultimecia in the future. I mean damn ...heartless

Call me sadistic but I would've let that bitch bleed. Hold my baby over a 30 foot drop and see if I show u mercy.

I am totally crying right now. I feel sorry for Mitchell if squall gets his hands on him. Hell l feel sorry for lauren if anybody gets their hands on her

Ps. I just remembered about the 2 year 7 day sorceress thing... Clever

Nnnnnooooooooooooo!