Reviews for Crimson Lies
MizukoMidori chapter 23 . 12/4/2004
OhMyGods I hate you! Ugh! Everything is just so... so! The way everything fits together and ugh!

I'm re-reading the story again. And it's so different knowing what's going to happen. Knowing how the pieces fit before the puzzles put together. Knowing about Lauren! It kills me thinking about it. It actaully made me cry this chapter when she informed Selphie of all that stuff because I KNOW! And surprisingly, I like Lauren, and it just makes me so sad.

But that's why I love this story so much. It's so phreakin' wonderful.

Okay back to re-reading.
Erasera chapter 42 . 11/23/2004

I can't believe how amazing this story was. It showed how deep and powerful love is and what it can do to people. The things humans do out of raw human emotion...It's astonishing.

I have always loved the Squall/Rinoa pairing and I really enjoyed reading this wonderful work of art. Actually, there really aren't any words to discribe how grabbing and real it was. I really enjoyed reading this and I hope that there are more to come.

Michelle chapter 42 . 11/19/2004
*sniff sniff* wonderful, just WONDERFUL!

its a great story... i love everthing u write lolzx
Lil Doro chapter 42 . 11/18/2004
*applauds madly* Ashbear ... you OWN me. This piece of writing is better than anything I've ever read in my life ... better than any fic, and any book. It has grabbed me and touched me and never was there a dull moment. Your writing is very long and in-depth and I would always be hanging off a cliff after ever chapter. Heck, it might've taken me a week to read this entire fic but it was well worth it! I'm not surprised that you are one of the most loved writers on , and you have definitely earned a place in my heart. I bet you hear this all the time, but you're my writing role-model ... and you should definitely consider a career in professional writing D Keke, anyways, it has been a real pleasure reading your work and I shall continue on to another one of your works! Keep up the good work, you have made me a stronger writer and reader in many ways! _
Erasera chapter 14 . 11/11/2004
OMFG! Squall is the prime suspect. I understand that no one knows where he went but damn. The last thing Squall needs is a more stressful situation on his shoulders. I can't wait to see how this unfolds!
Erasera chapter 7 . 11/7/2004
Hi, Ashbear. This is SquallsGIRL, from my review of Castles in the Sky.

I have to say, this is so grabbing. I feel sorry for Squall, Rinoa, Seifer, and most of all, Quistis. How could one live with a lie for that long? She had what she always wanted to an extent, but she'd never have it in full. Her attempts were sadly in vain and all she did was make everyone else's lives corrupt over one single, solitary word. And knowing that it is her fault had to have been a major burden. I do feel sorry for her.

"No Quistis, it was never you I looked as my wife. No, it was not you when I felt strained to kiss you. No, it was never you I saw when I forced myself to make love, have sex, or whatever the hell that was with you. No, Quistis it was never you. See how easy saying no is?"

That was cruel but I can't exactly blame him for saying it. If she said yes, she still would be miserable. It was a no win situation. Either way, she'd still be unhappy.

She probably wasn't thinking about just how bad her decision was at the time. She thought that it would have worked out but...

Truly a work of art here. I will definitely finish reading the story; every single word.
Shortey chapter 11 . 11/5/2004
That was a bit quick on the Seiftis part. I thought they were gonna face some trials first before hooking up. Well the action is still excellent.
Isis976 chapter 42 . 11/3/2004
This is really good. Normally when I read FFVI fics everything is all fine and dandy and then it goes downhill. I liked this one because it was angsty from beginning to end. Well done
Shortey chapter 8 . 11/3/2004
Very touching drama here. The story is like a soap opera. Cool, though.
Shortey chapter 5 . 11/2/2004
This is so damn good! I knew I've read this before but I lost interest as soon as I've read that Squall and Quistis was married. Now out of my boring day I revisited this again. I'm glad to read more about this.
Jasmine32 chapter 42 . 11/1/2004
A wondeful story. Absolutely amazing
Borris the girl chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
I cheated and read the last chapter. I haven't read any more of it but it seems depressing. My thoughts depressing enough so I decided to hold off on the rest of the story for now, but what I read was grand.
Arisa K chapter 42 . 10/19/2004
I have to say, I am very pleased with this. I remained dedicated to it for the past couple of days until I was finished with it. It's a fairly old work, but I thought my comment might be appreciated. A wonderful job. You have helped me gain a new level of respect for Rinoa and Squall as a couple. Well done.
MaxxKata chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
Okay, I haven't read this fic yet (Don't have time), but I was browsing through your profile after finally finishing reading 'Dancing in Time' (Took me days, but it is a wonderful fic and I don't have time to write a full suck-up review yet), and then I saw this and I was like WTF ONE THOUSAND THREE HUNDRED REVIEWS? So this will be my next priority... After finishing Castles in the Sky and reviewing it & Dancing in Time.

Neeh, you're like the best writer EVER~
BlueRain1 chapter 42 . 9/23/2004
This story took me a week to read, but man, am I glad I did! It was wonderfully written, that's all I can tell you. You've left me in awe once again. I mean, the plot flowed so nicely and all the pieces went together like some sort of puzzle.

Great story. I give you a 100/100 rating! _;

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