|Reviews for A Shot in the Dark|
| Katieelessar chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
I really enjoyed this story. You really captured the emotion and tensions here. Great work!
| carocali chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
I so love introspection with these characters. There is so much for Sam to take in; so much to deal with. He certainly didn't want to kill the woman, but that little part of him that is questioning all the things he's done wrong took over. Hoped that her death would save his brother. It may take him farther away...
Really nice piece!
| RavensAngst chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
That was a great oneshot. I liked the way you delved in to Sam's head and brought out in words what he has to be feeling.
I can tell you've watched the show from the beginning.
As a writer, I must say, the story is very well constructed. The only advice I can give is to just make things a bit more subtle and a little less straight forward...if that makes any sense.
Anyway, great job and good story. I'm glad I caught it to review.