Reviews for Flabbergasted Phenomenon
Guest chapter 7 . 12/16/2018
Edward thinks she unfaithy. Golly ,wonder why. She runs off ,in the books, to see Jacob all the time. Even though she's been told his thoughts are not that of a friend. Comes back smelling like him, and knows he purposely puts out thoughts that aren't just a friend. Then the night of tears. Boo hoo. The way she's acting in these chapters, how could he think otherwise! Then to throw his suspicion in his face. What a mean spiteful WIFE. Does she EVER think about how much she hurts Edward, ever.
Emily chapter 36 . 12/31/2017
Please tell me that you made a sequel to this story:(
Kushka chapter 36 . 12/3/2017
Good story
jk chapter 27 . 5/21/2017
a doctor lives in the hotel? yaaaa okkkk
jk chapter 15 . 5/21/2017
like you needed to make bella more have her "attacked" by a bunch of men again by a bar...just like what happened in the book...did that happen in this too? so now its twice? I'm sorry but...they could find a better looking victim...just saying
jk chapter 12 . 5/21/2017
is this how the whole story is gonna be? what bella eats or doesn't? fainting...dizziness...crying...nothing but crap? its fucking lame! You know, not all pregnant woman are like this! attention whores! some women do pregnancy really fucking well. Why not have that be bella?
Ayina11 chapter 35 . 5/5/2017
did you write this story before breaking dawn book published? because I remember the book published in 2008, and you wrote it in 2007. I love this story
Ayina11 chapter 36 . 5/5/2017
I love this story, very much
Kushka chapter 36 . 3/6/2017
Good story
Tan R chapter 7 . 1/18/2017
This is humour and drama? 'Cause girl (or boy) all I'm reading is drama drama drama.
jk chapter 31 . 8/14/2016
chapter 31-

let me get this straight...alice say a vision of bella going into labor so she tried to interrupt bella and Edward when they were gonna have sex cause...? shes just a stupid meddling bitch?
jk chapter 7 . 8/13/2016
bellas acting really fucking stupid.
Booklover101 chapter 2 . 2/1/2016
Ha, does Edward not know you never talk about anything pertaining to a woman's "time of the month". If it was me I would have hurt him. Lol
Guest chapter 27 . 4/14/2014
OMFG. I just have to say it (btw it has nothing to do with your writing or your story, it'S good but,) OMFG I WANT TO SLAP BELLA IN THE FACE UNTIL SHE WAKES UP. How can she allow herself first to be so dependent of Edward and second to be so oblivious to his fucking wrong doings for god sake. The dude is controlling her entire freakin life and dont give me the ''he's trying to protect her crap'' she needs to EFFING STAND UP FOR HERSELF AND NOT LET HIM DO ALL THIS SHIT !

as you all can see I was pissed.
Caz1105 chapter 36 . 8/12/2013
Okay, good ending xxx
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