Reviews for Flabbergasted Phenomenon
BloodSukr chapter 36 . 3/30/2011
WOW this story is a-w-e-s-o-m-e!

I love it!

Fabulously awesome!
kara chapter 36 . 2/19/2011
Fantastic story! :)
Melissa72 chapter 36 . 12/18/2010
Ok. First, you have talent...keep on doing what you are doing and thank you for sharing the gift God gave you to write. Second, am I the only one who thinks your characterization of Bella was...umm...a bit neurotic? This girl was a walking time bomb of self-absorption, cluelessness, and emotional dependency. She made it seem like pregnancy was a crippling disease. Her lack of independence and confidence was...well, noticeable.

But then again, who am I? I can't write to save my life *chuckle* You may want to change the story descriptions from Humor/Drama to just Drama...the only humor was Emmett calling her Belly. I was glad the birth chapters were a bit lighter...or at least Bella wasn't having emotional breakdowns from stubbing her toe:)

Keep up the great work...Oh! I forgot. I didn't buy that Edward would question her fidelity when he found out she was preggers. I get how you tried to make that a possibility...but it stuck out as unbelievable in my book. Thanks for listening to my rambling ConCrit:) God bless~

BloodLust92 chapter 36 . 11/29/2010
This story was so good! I absolutely Loved it! Great job :D
Myspaceisdaocean chapter 2 . 11/24/2010
Wait what surgery?
TeamEdward246 chapter 21 . 10/4/2010
I'm a little confused about this story but i love it anyway!
lauren0126 chapter 36 . 8/18/2010
loved it!
sunflowr chapter 36 . 8/11/2010
Very gripping story - a page turner!
maria chapter 36 . 7/27/2010
hey do you speak spanish man!Im from honduras great story I LOVED IT!
turtlemister chapter 36 . 7/12/2010
Very well done! I really loved reading this! I can honestly say that this is the best story on fanfiction that I have read so far. Errors were practically nonexistant, the plot was good, and the characters were each distinct. One thing that is common with writers on this site, is how they let the events of their story unfold. They will often have things happen in ridiculous ways and events, and make it seem very unrealistic (not that vampires are realistic in the first place). I cannot say the same for your story, however. I could picture everything that was happening in my head and everything fit together. Very nice work. I can't wait to read what you come up with next!
Cullen819 chapter 32 . 6/7/2010
so I don't get it... if Aro was there, he would have known that they were lying. It doesn't make sense to me...
Schnullerschnecke chapter 36 . 6/7/2010

I just read your story and I really liked it.

Your wrote it really good I couldn't stop readying for the hole afternoon

Now I'm goo have a look what your other FF are...maby there is anotherone witch I like.

Best wishes
Lolly Twilight 95 chapter 36 . 4/27/2010
I really enjoyed reading the story however i gotta say i didnt like how there were so many sad parts
xxxafc chapter 36 . 4/19/2010
i love this 3
Emmett's One True Love chapter 36 . 3/14/2010
Good story!
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