Reviews for Broken Ends
starlightwilight chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Oh, SO sad! But strangely beautiful... When will you be posting the next chapter?
Asuka Saruwatari chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
That was...great!
Warui-Usagi chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
Woah. This was just...holy crap. I'm speechless. This was FANTASTIC. I'm completely and utterly addicted. This is freaking brilliant! The way you had Jacob looking at Bella as a lesson - the way he watched her wedding and suffered was heartbreaking, way you wrapped it all up in the end was just amazing. Especially that last line. It worries me to see Jacob so emotionless, though. Maybe Bella was too much of an "experience." Interesting.

I'll be waiting desperately for more, but in the meantime, I'll stic it in my favourites, and my C2 for that matter!
kelly chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
I really love you story keep it up please right more more more
aeliuned chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
nice...but i thought jake was a little OOC...but it's still delicious. espesh the cave
The Nerd chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
That Not to mention beautiful, chilling, and incredibly scary.
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