Reviews for Ascension
Sephiroth owns u all chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Awesome Story Please Continue
bubble.duckie chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
I wonder why you guys didn't update this anymore when it has a lot of potential. In any case, i like reading Otome fics as I think Shizuru and Natsuki are sexier there! I honestlly can't tell whAt part you or Leebot wrote as everything seemed to flow fine! I really love both of your compositions and here's to hoping you won't get tired of writing more! Cheers!
firelarc chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
well writen so far. cant wait to see what hapens next chapter. cant wait for an update
VanillaSlash chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
LOL! Uh-oh! Shizuru's gone to the dark side! Natsuki better get there first! :D I can't wait for the battle!
helleboros chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Nice start :). It's always nice to see pre-Column Natsuki and Shizuru and I'm intrigued to see where you're taking this.

I must admit I was a bit sad that Natsuki was so quick to accept that her "relationship" with Shizuru was pretty much one-sided. "I'm yours, not the other way around," Shizuru says, and Natsuki goes, "Good. Glad we cleared that up." (effectively) I mean, yeah, Natsuki's kinda emotionally constipated, but this is the bit where you're meant to confess that the feeling's mutual! How sad :(.

With regards to the exhibition match, I'm afraid that Natsuki's coming off as a bit of a brat. Arika and Nina were proud to earn their places at the head of the Corals and felt privileged to be part of the match, even if Nina had reservations about working with Arika. They resolved to work hard and put in a good showing in honour of their own efforts and the efforts of the graduating Pearls. Natsuki, however, is all dejected because she's going to be defeated in public and is resigned to being "pummelled". It kind of a sad attitude to have and I must admit I expected better of her :(.

I'm also a bit confused about the point of the bet. We know from Episode 16 that, as of Arika's era, no Coral had ever beaten a Pearl, so Mai and Natsuki are obviously going to lose. So, essentially, they just have to ... hang in there, for Natsuki to win a "favour"? The terms seem sort of intangible.

I think I'd prefer it if Shizuru won, though :). She could then ask for something completely unexpected, making Natsuki ashamed for assuming that Shizuru would try to force her to do something she's not ready for and hopefully cementing her trust in Shizuru.

Just my opinion though :D. I guess I'll just have to wait and see what actually happens :). Thank you for your efforts.
jquackers chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
This was really interesting. It's funny when Shizuru is "forgetful" XD
reviewerskye chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
oh my god! update please! i want to know what happens next. lol. i'm curious what the winner's going to have the loser do. haha. please please please!
chum-sa chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
End?...Complete?...Give me more chapter...I want to know What happen next...Who win?...Natsuki or Shizuru? so update, please
rozlilta chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Oh God!

This fic is amazing. I love it.

There aren't many Otome fics, and is great that you two have decided to do this one.

They're so in character, it's exceptional. Go on, and make us more happy.

Goes to my favorites.
shiznats chapter 1 . 11/23/2007 for the late review...

As i've already told u *ages ago* that i always keep the best for last...hehehe...

So, this is interesting...coauthoring and stuff...sounds fun...

I also thank Leebot for bringing us another story...

Arigatou, Caz-sama...

*so, ur mother gave u a new look...O_o

can't wait to see some pictures...

I haven't made a comment on ur lj page for ages...

big hug...*
AnimeJock chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Oh awesome. Can't wait to read what's next.
mantikora chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
heh) I love both of your guyses styles of writing, and this is pretty sweet story line) Fllows together smoothly, the only thing I can guess is that the kisses part was centauri-san's)
tears of the soul chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
Nice to meet you. I find your story quite interesting,you dont find many fics that dare to pit Natsuki and Shizuru against each other and I can wait to see whats gonna happen. hope to see a lot of action as well as there gonna be any interaction with the characters as well? I hope to see some heated battle against Natsuki and Shizuru,Ive always wondered who will win in a battle the two.(my money's on shizuru )hope you have the energy to write the next wait!
lindred chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
two people wrote this? i can't tell the difference. it just looks so seamless to me.

i'll be eagerly a-waiting the next chapter
Keiko-chan2000 chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
Wow two of my favorite Natshiz writers combined and what happens- nothing short of a great fic I must say _ I couldn't really pinpoint who wrote what exactly, but it did seem to me that Leebot wrote a majority of the fic only because of the wording and juxtaposition of certain scenes seem very reminscent of Lee's other fics. However both of your writing styles blend well, I didn't feel confused while reading this nor did anything feel out of place. I was really excited when I notice the main characters were young Kruger/Viola. Fics about young Kruger/Viola are few and far between. I like the plot and concept so far. I will definately be back. Kudos.

Peace out-Keiko-chan
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