Reviews for Responsibilities
GrayRainbows chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Oh wow, that's an interesting premise for a fic! Aside from the small fact that I can't get my head around the idea of her being pregnant at 57 (late 40s or even 50 would be more plausible, but the reality of timeline gets in the way), I do like this story.

I love its bleakness; happy endings aren't always the best ones. Her choice was the right one, hard as it is, for health reasons, and just because of the inconsistency of Luke; I like how honest she was with herself, about that. It's sad, nonetheless, because if they were even a little younger, it would be sweet to see them have a child together. But I rather like to think that sharing this sadness would bring them closer, too.

And I really liked that you included ghost Alan!

And any momentary warmth between Monica and Tracy is so nice.
Ms. Quartermaine chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
Wow. This was very powerful. Kind of sad that LuNacy had to divorce in it, but I understood. Loved Monica going off on Lulu! Great job!
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
Very emotional one shot. You do Tracy much more justice than the show does. I wish Luke and Tracy relationship was given ths kind of depth and thoughtful writing on the show.