Reviews for the Weight in Gold
I am The Lev chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
I normally hate the first-person perspective, but you have a really good handle on it.

I enjoyed the introspection, and the possible thought behind his betrayal. I don't think that he's truly betrayed the gang. I think that he's trying to be good, but he doesn't quite know how to go about it.

Anyway, lovely story.
gatewatcher chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
I haven't seen any new episode as of yet... March is a long way off. but, I have faith in Allan. He will be redeemed somehow... I hope.

Nice story.

Lana
Esmerelda Diana Parker chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
not bad...

and yes...Allan's brother's name is Tom...Lucky George was the trader/theif they stole the cart from
potterinu chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
This is not a real review of this just me asking you to update Wyckham. Please.
Kail Ceannai chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
I was behind on watching the season 2 eps, and I watched 'em all yesterday because I was excited to read this without spoilers.

You did a great job reweaving the story from Allan's perspective. Yeah, I do think you hit his motivations incorrectly, but I also think that you did a pretty good job on his character ) If anything, it'd be interesting to see how your Allan would create an AU from the cannon-Allan.