Reviews for Lost
librarycat9 chapter 4 . 2/8/2010
I want psychic paper...
librarycat9 chapter 2 . 2/8/2010
I love badass Hinata... That's awesome...
Anzer'ke chapter 4 . 9/19/2009
This is a great story but aren't you over emphasizing guns just a bit too much. Even in the real world there exist methods for dodging bullets )mainly at close and long range) when you factor in the Shinobi's insane speed, durability (attacks much more powerful then bullets are frequently shrugged off), reflexes, judgement and flexibilty even before Jutsu come into it...well guns would be pretty much useless above Genin level.

Still a great story, I look forward to continuing to read it.

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.
SaceSage chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
I love it already! Very original and I like the idea of Naruto being banished and a young Hinata going after him. The abr scene was amazing! 3
Malix2 chapter 16 . 6/6/2009
I stopped reading this for about a week or so because I was getting fed up waiting for hinata to find naruto, I was surprised to find it was only a few chapters away. It's getting interesting, but I think I'm going to take a break for a while. I idly wonder if any of the main characters survived konoha, and if so, then if they'll make an appearance. I guess I'll find out seeing as this story is complete, unless there's a sequal or something.
Deception chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Please to god can you please continue this it may be 1 of the best i have read so far :D
lord admiral belisarius chapter 15 . 5/25/2009
excellent chapter. I like your style. You're a fellow Sabaton fan, cool.
Lord Blood chapter 22 . 5/17/2009
it's been a great story so far, but i think i might just stop reading...it's WAY too OC for me to like, and i dunno if this entire thing with the red eyes is all just a crossover or just own invention.

what the hell is the point of writing a naruto story that has very little naruto elements in it?
Lord Blood chapter 5 . 5/16/2009
how do you fire an rpg while driving?
MrEmperor chapter 45 . 5/16/2009
A nice story.
Cenright chapter 15 . 5/10/2009
It was original, I give you that. I gave it an honest shot, but it just wasn't my 'cup of tea'.
Serinity Dawn chapter 21 . 12/28/2008
HOLY SHIT! And I really mean that!
Serinity Dawn chapter 19 . 12/28/2008
Priest reminds me of Alucard from Helsing I am writing this just after reading the chapter. I know that the contest is over but hey...
naruhinaultrasuperfan4437 chapter 12 . 12/17/2008
best action EVER!
Gaara'slilsis chapter 43 . 12/16/2008
I just happened to notice a mistake in chapter 42... you said that Itatchi turned into a 'gaggle' of crows, but, a group of crows is actually called a 'murder'... just thought you should know! Love the story by the way!
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