|Reviews for Brotherhood of the Wing|
| Joy chapter 8 . 7/31/2011
Please continue story, I really enjoy it and want to find out what happens next. :)
| HatedLove6 chapter 8 . 5/1/2010
Hilo! I have to say, I absolutely LOVE this story. I favorited this a while ago, but I just didn't get around with reviewing, and I know I should have a lot sooner, I'm sorry. I'm not even sure if you'll read this review, but just in case you do, here goes:
Very well written, there are minimal spelling and grammar errors, and the descriptions are great. You have everyone pretty much in character.
Just letting you know now, that Stork is actually in his early twenties and everyone else in the Storm Hawks is around 14. I don't know about Radarr though. All of the episodes are on Youtube (everything's on Youtube lol). You didn't mess anything up because a lot of people think he's 16, I just thought you might want to know. You can talk to me about anything to do with the Storm Hawks.
The main reason I didn't review sooner was because I didn't want to offend you. Your dog died at the time, andI'm sorry about that dearly, so I wanted to say something like, dedicate the entire story to Sloopy so finish it for Sloopy, but I thought that was insensitive so I was holding off before I kind of moved on to another story and forgot about this story.
I'm reviewing now because I didn't want you to give up on this story, or forget about it. I'm not saying to update soon, because we're all pretty busy with a bunch of things, just update when you can. Even getting in one sentence a day can do wonders.
What helps is to actually write out seperate scenes for your fic. I know certain scenes from mine get stuck in my head so when I have it typed down it assures me that I have it down and when I can use it I can just copy and paste it instead of getting stuck. I apologize if that didn't make any sense. Anyway, I just hope we get to at least hear from you, and if you need to talk I, and I'm pretty sure over half of your reviewers, are willing to listen -
| AnotherStorkFreak chapter 8 . 7/6/2009
Gah! I love this story! You write battles very well! I was so interested in the story that I've been reading it non-stop all day and am now giving this review at 2:30 in the morning...I know I'm reading this like a year after you wrote it, but I hope you continue on with this story because it would be a horrible waste if you didn't. Anyway, if you get this or not, know that I love your writting and am waiting for the next chapter even if you've stopped this fanfiction.
Hopefully I don't have to wait for long? SEE YA!
| phynix666 chapter 8 . 5/10/2009
This story was one of the best I've EVERY read _ definately reading more of yours.
P.S. cookies rule _
| Breea chapter 8 . 4/16/2009
yay that was a good chapter. i hope u write more soon
| Alkira Sonoma chapter 8 . 12/28/2008
wah x( NU FALSHADE! you need to update this seriously I really like it but NO HOW CAN FALSHADE .
UPDATE SOON! :P
| phynix666 chapter 5 . 12/5/2008
Hey babe it's your friendly evil Ninja (Mwahaha) just found one little mistake in your spelling of cwitenly ... I believe it's cOItenly, but aside from that AWESOME STORY I finally remembered my Password for the first time since Norwood so I'll be reading all of them now (you were warned)
Love ya :P
| Golden Snowflake chapter 2 . 8/10/2008
This is intriguing, in-character, clever, and fun to read. Forget this! I wanna keep going! ONWARD-HO!
| Golden Snowflake chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
WOW. They're fabulously in-character. Why do all the good fics hide whenever I go scouting for them? (grumble grumble)
If you're this good in the first chapter, I can't wait to get to the pairing fluff. XP I shall continue!
| Mish chapter 8 . 7/4/2008
Your story roocks! I can't wait to see more! Keep it up! Please!
| GraffitiRythm chapter 8 . 5/12/2008
Okay, so, I've been giddily reading your Storm Hawks fics for a while and I have to say... GAH, I love this like crazy. You have no idea how excited I got when you made your latest update, hahah! Wing is an amazing OC and I adore her with Stork. I'm addicted. Can't wait for more!
Also wanted to give my condolences. Losing a pet, especially one as devoted as Sloopy, is so incredibly hard. This is a lovely tribute to her.
| justclaire44 chapter 8 . 5/11/2008
some parts were really funny and it was really really well writin u did good
and speaking from expierince i am really truly sorry about your dog my dog died last year and it was very hard to deal with so may she rest in peace
| Nikooru-chan chapter 8 . 5/2/2008
OH FALSAHDE! *cuddles the Falshade plushie from last time and sobs*
You really impressed me with this chapter! I don't know why, but the scene where everyone is in the courtyard just seemed so god damn perfect to me. You make the characters seem a lit more human, and mature then they are in the show. You've managed to keep their original personalities, and yet make them more relatable. It takes a real artist to do that (a skill I unfornatually do not have). You've got the gift, dear!
And don't ever worry about updating if you don't feel you can. Especially after something as tramatic as a death of a pet. (god, if my dog ever dies I don't know what I'll do. I don't think I could go on. S) If you rush, it won't turn out as well as it could. And now that I know you can write epically like this, I'm expecting that every chapter from now on will be nurtured and cared for, and have its time to grow. LOL, just don't rush, kay?
Hm... I think this is the longest review I've ever written. But Brotherhood of the Wing deserves such praise. If this does not turn into one of those epic stories, then you're being seriously ripped off.
Well, enough kiss assing. GREAT JOB!
| Dotskip317 chapter 8 . 5/2/2008
I LOVE YOU GODDAMMIT!
| Emerald Gaze chapter 8 . 5/2/2008
its ok this chap was worth it and i cant wait to read the next 1!...sorry bout ur dog Sloppy..nice name by the way! and i luv ur story!_!