|Reviews for Worldwar: Discovering the Balance|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2022
Was one of the world war stories deleted
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/6/2022
Nice story for the most part however earth needs to launch a retaliation strike since the colonials attempted a nuclear strike on earth's most populated cities. Something like that can not go without a response at least strike at colonial forces outside their home star system.
| Fleet Corner Trimmer 2415 L.S chapter 10 . 11/21/2020
Well this is a fun fic
I don't know much of the Worldwar franchise outside of the basics but I really like when you've done with the race.
I'm sure you've been payed a million compliments on the story so (as much as I love it) I'm going to give a detail that really annoys me.
'English ship'... 'England' doesn't have any ships, 'Great Britain' does... I see this mistake almost everywhere and as a Scotsman it really irritates me to the point of ridiculousness
England hasn't been an independent nation in almost three hundred years, simply severing as the Capital area of the British Isles and only one of the two Kingdoms that formed 'Great Britain'
| davidiscoolya113 chapter 1 . 1/25/2020
Species:human. origin: Gaia/Earth/soul. subspecies: hyper maxamus adaptus erectus hyper sapient overdrive break past limit evolutionus. galactic title: tari.
Shows show up: Stargate/Battlestar Galactica/MegaMan/MegaMan x/MegaMan zero/Deus Ex: Mankind Divided/blank/blank/blank/blank/blank.
| Liz chapter 8 . 1/16/2020
Would the Colonials know about Swiss cheese? Ha Ha! I really enjoyed these series of stories and I am reading them from the beginning yet again.
| Red Death chapter 2 . 1/14/2020
I had fully forgotten that your WorldWar series started more than a decade ago... weeeeeeird...
| RDDash chapter 3 . 10/21/2019
Using hyperjump to travel inside of a solar system feels like a waste
| Blaze1992 chapter 10 . 1/9/2019
Okay it's interesting but kinda iffy on some parts.
Namely how in the final battle the IOA ships didn't just beam nukes into the enemy ships before they got into actual nuke range?
| darkfinder chapter 2 . 5/20/2018
fun stuff . strange they do show them there ship or there world .
| Iron Spike chapter 9 . 2/3/2017
I really enjoyed this mesh of 3 different stories. I read the first couple books in the Turtledove series a long time ago and think you did a fine job with their arrogance.
Very interesting take on what would have happened had the Colonies not been destroyed. I can certainly see Cain and others acting in such a way. I'm going to look for the prequel story you referenced where O'Neill and crew first encounter the Colonials.
Thanks for a good read. Looking forward to the next installments.
| Grovtech chapter 10 . 4/14/2016
Interesting how you took the normal 'good' guys and painted them black. The thing is I can see this happening. Cain was nut, but all the BSG crew we're familiar with would never be involved here. Admiral Adama was retiring and and the others were well not at the top of their game with the exception of Apollo and possibly Starbuck.
The Race is always fun. Their stuff might not be cutting edge, but by god they've been refined to a fine edge.
| tylermech66 chapter 10 . 11/14/2015
whelp.i'm definitely favoriting this for more people to read.
it's been a wonderful journey. oh jeez, it like 3:00 am now need slee-
| tylermech66 chapter 8 . 11/14/2015
Lister: Where is everyone Hol?
Holly: They're dead Dave.
Lister: Who is?
Holly: Everybody Dave.
Lister: What Captain Holister?
Holly: Everybody's dead Dave.
Lister: What Todd Hunter?
Holly: Everybody's dead Dave.
Lister: What Selby?
Holly: They're all dead, everybody's dead Dave.
Lister: Peterson isn't, is he?
Holly: Everybody is dead Dave.
Lister: Not Chen?
Holly: Gorden Bennet, yes Chen, everybody, everybody's dead Dave.
Holly: He's dead Dave, everybody's dead, everybody is dead Dave.
Lister: Wait, are you trying to tell me everybody's dead?
Holly: *slightly under breath* Shouldn't have let him out in the first place!
this is how I feel about the freakin' Race!
| tylermech66 chapter 3 . 11/14/2015
it took that last bit to realize that his exclamation was, in fact, alien 'holy crap!'
| bob chapter 4 . 6/10/2015
Shoot shit damn it.