|Reviews for Rogue Fox Armageddon Soul|
| JiggleBilly chapter 31 . 3/9
Poor Krystal.. oh well saw it coming. Evil in a Closet by IN FLAMES also went really well with krystals exploration of fox's mind.
| The Generic Ficer chapter 8 . 12/23/2014
1. Is it OK if I take a few quotes from chapters 4,5 and 6 for my fanfic? I already have you credited in the fanfic I am writing for a Star Fox/Yu-gi-oh crossover (both worlds within the same universe in this story).
2. I think, for Krystal, it was a very good thing she didn't encounter Bill, Slippy or especially Falco (In my fanfic I actually have Krystal encountering Falco and, let's just say it went very badly). I am actually writing 2 fanfics, one just has a basic summary of the events of the three years between Command and the fanfic itself in the prolouge for both Fox and Krystal, while the other goes much more in depth to those three years for both of them.
3. A quick explanation as to how I stumbled upon both this fanfic and the idea. I was browsing Krystal Archives looking for a particular fanfic I had seen before, but it turned out to not be what I thought it was. I then kept looking down the list and I found this fanfic. I clicked on the link and started reading. I reached chapter 8 and I found I could use a few ideas from it, and do a sort of "what if Krystal encountered Falco" scenario (explored briefly in my crossover, gone more in depth in other fanfic).
| Victoria Ascencio chapter 43 . 11/27/2014
I have to be honest? This is a masterpiece. Not only writing or storytelling, but in the depth of the plot and characters. Want to know something? I even wish that this were canon.
I congratulate you. Few works as good as yours are obtained from the fandom. It is obvious that you put a lot of effort, and the result has been a wonderful read. Yes, dark plot, but wonderful.
One last time, I congratulate you. Do not stop writing these great stories, that a good time have put me through. And now I leave you with this review in hand, and I'm running to read the sequel ;)
(PS: My English is not very good, is not my native tongue So, if I have an error, please warn me and correct me.).
| Mitch3ll6900 chapter 16 . 9/18/2014
NUUU! This tangled web is driving me insane!
| Mitch3ll6900 chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
Well, makes what I write seem like the ravings of a child! (Which they really are :D. I'm a gamer more than a writer.) Definitely piqued my interest. Good hook!
| DisturbingSigns1212 chapter 43 . 9/13/2014
This is one of the greatest stories i have ever read. It has it all, The emotion, Sadness and Twists, etc. You did very well.
| Guest fan chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
The story that I read is... I don't know. Fox fakes his death and is enrolled into a program to create super soilders. He's questionable he dyes himself black and uses a knife. At first I thought it was emoish but you sorta made it useful as sneaky and steathful. He can be a murderous phycopath but he has some character. He becomes vengeful and coldhearted abandoning everyone for betraying him. He tries to forth a new relationship with Kyla, who is an interesting character and likable. He goes insane once he's told that Kyla is dead and destroys everything that he once held dear. My guessing that you try to make him a tragic hero. For the most part it works fine but there can be a bit of annoance but he's decent. So the story is nice it may have a few problems but ok.
| Silver Snake chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
I read your story and its interesting even though it does have flaws it does it dues and can be a good story so no much to say anything else
| Silver Snake chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
interesting story even though it does have problems it's good I guess. can't wait for it to finish
| NH chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
Just a warning I'm a being very synical but serious. The fox in this story sounds and acts like an entitled little asshole. He becomes a murderous phycopath because Krystal refused to take him back, I still think she was a bit of a bitch for doing that but she was justified a little but. Fox thinks that just because he saved her on Sauria means that she has to be with him for the rest of his life, that's what an asshole does. If he wanted revenge he should've just been extremely public another girl, not destroy the fucking Lylat system
| rouge fox addict chapter 43 . 10/11/2013
syxx sir, I love your story and the thrill ride that it contains of humor, drama and action I love the cliffhanger ending and it's well worth the title MASTER PEICE
but... theirs a huge plothole in between the ending here and the beginning of part 2,
how did the team get away from the slayers, and how did krystal escape without a ship when Syxx destroyed the Great Fox 2 ?
| 123 chapter 2 . 3/20/2013
| 123 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
great dark story.
| 665 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
great excellent dark story.
| Slayer chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Syxx is a great from turned good to evil character. He progresses from a hero, to anti hero, to anti villain to a full fledged villain. He goes from the charming, caring, and loving Fox Mccloud to the coldhearted, and ruthless evil Slayer known as Syxx. Unfortunately he does have some problems with his character. He blames Krystal for his problems, which in reality he blames everyone for his misfortunes. which I agree. If you would've putted maybe some of Sweeney Todd's personality or someone like him then it would have his transition to evil and darkness much better and more believable. Hey Syxx is a great charcater but a bit of an emo at times,but still a bad ass. '' There's a hole in the world like a great black pit and it's filled with people who are filled with shit, and living in a world inhabiting it'' Syxx.