|Reviews for birthday massacre|
| Hijokugei chapter 16 . 9/14/2011
Seriously. Roxas is terrifying...
| lamatikah chapter 16 . 10/9/2010
wth. this was never completed?
| silentmusic16 chapter 16 . 4/8/2010
... .god. this is such a great story. like, sure, it's a little morbid, but it's very interesting and the characters are interesting. plus, everything is written SO well. like, your sentences and the words you use, they all paint a vivid picture in my mind. The story is really awesome. you NEED to update. it would be a crime not to.
hehe. i like the morbid humor. it's my kind of humor.
| Forkular chapter 16 . 2/26/2010
CONTINUE THIS PLEASE! I never was a big fan of horror, but this is amazingly good and interesting!
It's written so nicely and prepared in order of a certain beutiful way.
It would be a shame not to continue.
By the way, I love Roxas in this story-he's such a little sadist...wow, that sounded so evil..
Well, anyways, the story is lovely, and it makes me shudder while reading all of the parts and detail in this story.
| linear15cannon chapter 16 . 11/7/2008
(too lazy to log in)
Goosebumps. Thousands. I want to cry-my eyes burn-, but I can't. My chest is tight and the room has gone cold.
Yet I still find the story very addicting. Like air. When I pause to reflec on the story so far, a blooded Roxas, crooked smile painted on porcelain skin splash in moonlight always appears. It's a bit disturbing actual...
| 601238 chapter 16 . 8/24/2008
I just stayed up until 3AM to finish this XD It's so stomach-wrenchingly disturbing and different. These kinds of KH fanfics are practically nonexistent. I love your writing style. Plus it's about Namine. I love Namine XP
And I listened to Happy Birthday and it is amazing.
Can't wait for an update _
| Wingg-ed Wolf chapter 16 . 8/5/2008
This is why I love you,
Despite the fact that Roxas remains to be one of my favorite characters your sheer ablity to write is making me love the possiveness that's now coming to surface, and the fact that you make it so they don't go all that far out of character either!
This is why I love you!
| Lebrezie chapter 16 . 7/30/2008
thats all i can really say.
just give me a few moments, and i will...you know, type or something.
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that was amazing. utterly fantastic.
i went back and read the previous chapter, to get the feel of it again, and then when i read this one...gosh.
Its almost like...Roxas whole personality changed when Namine died...i mean, he seemed so normal...well until he created his own personal 'Namine'...but this Roxas, the past Roxas...he seems, yeah overly possessive... (and i use overly as an understatement)
Tag. never has that word has so much meaning...fear.
I literately had to take deep breaths after reading this chapter...ur writing it just so different, in a wonderful way...it really is amazing.
I have a million and one questions, i mean...when did this start, when did the fun loving Roxas become the possessive one...probably around the age of 10...those double digits...never a good year.
probably when he realized that Namine was making friends...
Roxas would not approve...of Riku...
its like Roxas threatened Namine, that day, when Roxas was sick, he came to school anyway, because he missed Namine so much...and then he saw her with Riku...
and that is probably when the 'unhealthy' possessiveness started.
he probably threatened her, but in a subtle way. told her that no one, was good enough for her...except him, because he knew her best.
it must have been something neither of them were aware of until it was too late...
gosh, Namine liked Riku...how did i not see that, she was just too afraid of Roxas...
she probably has been since that day, that is why she knew she could not be forgive...not tell him the truth, cause he would kill her too.
well i mean, just please update soon! please.
this chapter, was well all of them really are amazing...in the same but different ways.
well thanks again, for writing this, bye! :)
| Gamecrazy 25 chapter 16 . 7/30/2008
I've been reading this fic since the start but reviewed it only now because I'm such a lazy bum at reviewing. I'm working on it!
I like horror things with an air of mystery, so this fic is right up my alley.
Well, now we know that Namine has killed Riku and she's always been scared of Roxas. It seems like Roxas has had his sanity split right down the middle on the stump instead of the block of wood. Funny, I thought of that metaphor today to go with one of my in progress fanfics. I guess I put it to use in another area.
Off to review some other fics!
| JesusRox7111 chapter 16 . 7/30/2008
Woah...this is so creepy. I love ur style of writing...it fits the story's mood so well! I hate that Roxas is the bad guy, I gotta admit, but that's just cuz I'm a 'rabid Roxas fangirl' :) It's definetely getting really interesting, and I just can't wait for the next update D
| JesusRox7111 chapter 15 . 7/19/2008
Shoot! Roxas IS NUTS! Sorry I've hadn't reviewed. I've had really limited access to internet the last month -' But, man, this story has me on the edge! Please, don't tell me Roxas kills Namine! And, I'm kind of still wondering what Alice has to do w/ this, but I'm thinking peice of info will come when it comes. Hope you update soon!:)
| MooglyLover chapter 15 . 7/8/2008
I love this story
Ch. 15 really, REALLY left me wanting more.
I love Roxas's insane personality progression, though i'm not really sure where it is going.
| Lebrezie chapter 15 . 7/7/2008
I am so sorry for the late review...my birthday was yesterday...and u know how that goes, no time to ur self.
anyway, this chapter is AMAZING (like them all i know - right) i need to find a new adjective...
lets think: Extraordinary, Brilliant, Magnificent, Wonderful, Gory (its not a happy adjective, but it still fits) Clever, horrifying ...yep...and all hard to spell...except Gory...other than that, that the sun for spell check.
anyway, so yeah...Roxas is one psycho path, i was really hoping that he did not turn out that way, i mean...
he is going to kill Namine...sad. I. AM. GOING. TO. CRY.
-just to you know, give u fair warning and all that jazz.
but yeah...honestly i thought that Roxas killed Riku...i mean, i did not know Namine had it in her...I just thought Roxas would like u know intervene and then accidentally push him down the stairs...
and u know what, my wonderful brain had conveniently forgotten how Sora actually died, so his death was actually a surprise to me...how odd, i know...but it was a little more fun that way...i suppose.
yeah i wish his death was a little more dramatic, you make him seem like nothing to Roxas...i mean he still was his brother, one that he might hate, but still apart of him...you know, but i guess not.
...cause in the end no matter how many excuses i try to come up with Roxas KILLED Sora in the end...and there is nothing i can do to change that. :[
i like changing things.
so yeah...Namine realizes that Roxas is insane...but why?
ah! why did Roxas have to go crazy...
i mean maybe Fuu did see Roxas kill Sora and Namine...and gosh look at me, your story has turned my brain to mush, just writing anything that comes to mind...
so yeah, i was writing about how Namine dies. you know what i think, you know how Roxas is crazy i think he is going to phase in and out of loving Namine and Killing her...
once he catches her, he beats her for running away, then stops because he realizes what he is doing, he tries to comfort her but she gets up and runs away so he beats her again...
how odd, but does that not just seem like the exact thing Roxas would do...
and well i think that Namine is going to try to kiss him to help save her life...distract him, prove something to him...just before he gives the final blow...
and well i dunno how Roxas is going to react to that...but i mean i guess not well, cause i mean Namine DOES DIE...
so yeah, wonderful chapter (along with all those other adjectives i came up with earlier) and UPDATE SOON! THANKS! BYE! :)
| lamatikah chapter 15 . 7/5/2008
Lol, I was listening to Apres Moi all through this.
It really set the mood... funnily enough.
Like while Riku's dead:
I -ooh- must go on standing.
me: crapnabbit. .
But, it was good to go along with.
NO ROXAS, WHYY?
Roxas: "Because you were going to tell the others. You were going to hurt Naminé."
Me: But how did you knooww?
Ya know what I think?
I think that they should have sorted it civily, not all 'teenage queen; loaded gun'.
You know, sat down and talked about it. Then decided that Naminé would stand as witness to him getting mad at her and then running away and falling down the stairs.
People just HAD to die.
| lamatikah chapter 14 . 6/22/2008
DON'T DO IT, NAMI! DON'T BE SACRED.
-cough- Anyhoo, omg, I love this story.
WE'RE ALMOST THERE.
Thankfully you have me to psycho-analyse all yer characters.
So, you know when people do like water and don't.