Reviews for She Who the Prophecy Foretold
Chun chapter 1 . 10/27/2023
Please finish this. It's really good.
Jessica chapter 81 . 9/17/2023
Next ch, please.
Wren210 chapter 14 . 9/15/2023
rin wouldn't be getting any kind of lessons 1. she isn't important enough 2. she isn't smart enough 3. she is human and human in that time period did not know how to read or write and being 10 what she would need is a villager to teach her how to be a good wife which mean obedient and how to pop out babies for her husband and how to be quiet.
and besides girls didn't learn anything... most girls where sold for abandoned they were not important let's say there was a fire and there were 2 children a girl and a boy they boy would be saved and the girl would die there were too many girls as it was and boys were needed to fight girls were only good for producing children
so the only lesson rin would be getting is how to play in her flowers

seeing stone... again what kind of witchcraft is the woman into because Kagome's mother had no type of power she was born outside of the SHRINE... or are you saying that Kagome and Souta has no father? Mr. Higurashi has never existed?
Wren210 chapter 13 . 9/15/2023
they would not have four poster beds in the feudal era even the emperor had a futon a very large on but a futon none the less... there would be no western design in anything as the US was still in the dark ages sleeping on the floor or on straw beds

what world are you living in that you would put Sesshomaru in a marble palace that is more extravagant than what the emperor would have... be real do the research to make it all sound believable and why put importance on rin when she wasn't important Shippo is more so as he was with the main party
Wren210 chapter 11 . 9/14/2023
you know I just looked up when Strawberries were brought to Japan and it was in 1830 and the InuYasha story took place 1550-1560 so please tell me how Sesshomaru at being 500 was able to have have known what strawberries and cream smell like?

300 hundred years before strawberries were even known Sesshomaru and mother ate strawberries and cream and they didn't even have cream at that time either... please for the sake of your story don't use modern foods or things that those that live in the past wouldn't know anything about...

BTW: my granddaughter is 10 years old and she is over 4 feet tall and Sesshomaru is 5'11" so you mark it out and tell me that a 10 year old would be hugging his leg and not his waist... that is unless rin is a dwarf and is still 2 feet tall... hopefully you won't put too much importance on rin as she was always a background character of little import... Shippo had a bigger role and was growing stronger all during the anime...

so what kind of witch is Kagome's mother considering she isn't a shrine maiden it was Kagome's father that would have been the priest her mother was just a normal women that married into the Shrine Family she is NOT of the SHRINE or is it the fact that Kagome isn't even her daughter since her mother HAD NO POWERS and the person pretending to be her mother is some dark witch or evil entity...

and why would Kagome smell like food to begin with? unless it is her shampoo but Sesshomaru still wouldn't know what the food she was supposed to be be...

a little research goes a long way in making a good story...
Wren210 chapter 6 . 9/14/2023
you do realize that rin would be 10 as she was 8 at the start of the anime if you age Kagome 2 years making her 17 then you need to age the rest of the humans... youkai age much slower therefore they wouldn't age it would take up to 10 years or more for them to even age a year...
and by having rin act in the manner that she is makes her seem like the village idiot...
Wren210 chapter 2 . 9/13/2023
another person that doesn't understand or comprehend that Kagome's mother IS NOT the DAUGHTER of Grandpa HIGURASHI He is her FATHER IN LAW not father Mrs. Higurashi married into the Higurashi family in other words Kagome's father Mr. Higurashi married your hiromi to make her a Higurashi not the other way around... look it up it even says that Grandpa is the father-in-law to Kagome's mother...
FlamingStar93 chapter 1 . 7/3/2023
I love this story and woul really like to be continued when you find the time. I really want to see how the rest of this Story will turn out.
Mo chapter 23 . 7/11/2022
I’ve read this particular story since you posted it several years ago.. I was home for awhile because of brain surgery 2 aneurysms to be exact. I absolutely loved this story you created. Do you have more chapters or the completed story posted elsewhere. Thank you for this totally awesome piece you wrote
Kway0623 chapter 81 . 7/6/2022
This story is so good! I really hope you come back and finish it someday
Goddess6baby chapter 1 . 7/5/2022
when are you going to finish this story
ACB621993 chapter 81 . 11/26/2021
Oh wow I usually don’t read stories until they’re finished I guess I just thought it was complete because it’s over 400k I know it’s been a while but I hope you come back!
Paizai chapter 5 . 7/23/2021
if it’s any consolation Jake gets a bit better in inuyasha the final act
anonehmoose chapter 81 . 6/24/2021
I know it’s been over 5 years but PLEASE COME BACK AND FINISH THIS! I don’t usually read unfinished stories but this one was sooo good and it’s one of my favorites! We didn’t even get the good parts of them defeating Nakuru, her finding her dad, how rin is connected to this, her officially being his mate, and life after that
s.j.andersen99 chapter 81 . 5/12/2021
I love this story so so so much! I wish you would complete it!it’s amazing
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