Reviews for I Come To You In Pieces
KaKashi's Okami chapter 22 . 8/30/2017
Mannn, I wish it had a oneshot sequel about their relationship as captions now...
Luizals chapter 22 . 3/31/2016
I have this scene stuck in my head so I decided to share it with you, cause maybe it will spark you to write more of this story.
It's renji convincing the other captains(shuuhei is late or something) to do the trick with the collar being a bit messed up that was commented on the beginning of the fic(where all the friends are in the bar and they all burst out laughing cause shuuhei fixed it even though they've done it since forever) then some of the captains do it and shuuhei notices and during the meeting he gets distracted by it and ends up going up to the captain closest to him(or maybe the on in front I of him for more effect) and fixing their clothing in the middle of everything.
Then I have this other scene in my head that shuuhei arranges thing mathematically when is objects in a space(makes sens, don't know how to explain it right but there are people that do that. They arrange things to suit mathematical equations ) then when kisuke moved the tea cup on that chap shuuhei noticed urahara fixed the pattern for him and urahara knows shuuhei is kinda awesome in math(maybe a genius) and later tries to steal shuuhei away cause he thinks shuuhei has potential to be as smart as him...? Haha. Ideassssssssss. Please right more of it?
WatchingTheWatchman chapter 22 . 12/28/2015
This is a gorgeous story! I love the characterization of everyone, especially Shuuhei and Renji. They're all dynamic, multi-dimensional characters, which is hard to do well, and you definitely are good at it. The drama and tension is lovely, and the plot has great pacing. I'm glad to see the happy ending for Kira as well, he deserves it.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
I wanted to let you know that this story has stuck with me my whole life. I can't begin to tell you how much it moved and inspired me as a young writer. I was once even in the process of writing my own spin off short based around the universe you'd set up here. Your fic helped me get through my own unrequited love and self doubt. There was a lot I didn't understand as a young reader but now that I'm older I'm blown away by how dense and well thought out each line of each chapter is. You have a real art for conveying pain and making it relatable. Though I don't watch Bleach or write much for the fanbase anymore, I will never forget this story. It will always make me cry and give me hope and hold a special place in my heart. Thank you for creating something so beautiful and so completely unforgettable.
Jazzybella chapter 22 . 6/5/2014
I love you. OMG you have written so much angstysexydirtysweet times. This is such a beautiful piece of work, so well written, awesome plot, and such smexy times. You are awesome. Ugh I am fangurling over this work so much. *sigh*
Amora.Lee chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
Poor Hisagi aint that just the worst
AidenM chapter 22 . 2/15/2014
OMFG! Star i loved it! From beginning to end, word for word! I loved it better that orange spice pocky!
Nightwalker365 chapter 22 . 12/2/2013
This was a really great story. Thank you so much for posting it!
Guest chapter 6 . 8/6/2013
Shuuhei's OCD is sooooo adorable hehe. I like whats going on so far, looking forward to plowing through the rest yay
ResplendentQuetzal chapter 22 . 6/24/2013
Again, absolutely loved it. Plot, characterization, and writing style were all spot on. Definitely been brought over to the ShuuRenji fanclub.
Chambie chapter 8 . 6/16/2013
I'm a new reader of lemons in general but I have to say that i am so wrapped up in this story! The characters are so easy to relate to. I really just want to say good job i haven't had good reading like this in ages and I'm forcing myself to go slow so that it wont end.
Aysiel chapter 22 . 6/7/2013
Amazing story! I had never paid that much attention to Hisagi besides the momentary 'Ah, he looks really cool...' but this story has made me like him infinitely more! Thanks for the great work and good luck on any of your future stories!
WhimsyUsagi chapter 22 . 5/27/2013
excellent story, thank you so much
Scarlotte O'Hara chapter 15 . 3/22/2013
love shu's im really that good comment. totally made me grin.
Toni Toni Choppaa-kun chapter 22 . 2/21/2013
Thank you so much for such a phenomenal story! This has probably been the most beautiful fic I have ever read in my life! I am absolutely in love with how you write and the balance you put between all the characters and the extremely well-thought out plot. I read pretty much all of it in one sitting and I thank you because that hour or two has been amazing! Thank you so much!

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