Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The comment before mine had me wondering if I should read this recommended fic after all, and I’m happy that I ignored it and read on. Sweet happy fic with family fluff and love. I couldn’t put it down. |
![]() ![]() DNF. I can't bring myself to go beyond half a chapter. I feel like this chapter is making a carticature out of women having a choice in their bodies. A teen pregnancy is a harrowing experience and not one to be brushed aside. And Pansy not being motherly as a result is also natural. But instead of handling this with even a modicum of empathy or subtlety, it just portrays Pansy as a whiny bitch. Also, Draco's reactions to her are quite demeaning. Like when she's feeling unwell from her pregnancy and he just tells her that she's giving him a headache. I have no idea how this story is popular. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read this in a day. Glad they got their HEA |
![]() ![]() ![]() I struggle to see this chapter realistically. only because after suffering a trauma I don't know if Hermione would be down for what happens after. however I enjoy the rest of the story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() aaaaw, my heart is melting!thank you for this absolutely wonderful story! I loved each cgapter a loooot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ouchie, ouch ,:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, I would love to have a mouthcleansing spell ln hand in mornings! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes, yes yeeeeees! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aaae, such a tease! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh, please please some hot scene would be incredible ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() didnhe not eat breakfast?! :D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() farts and quickies are spontaneous:D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my sweet Helga! he just asks like that? :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story. I obsessively read it over three days and found your writing seamless. Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() there's actually ALOT of research that points to physical punishment being extremely detrimental to a child's development. even 'juist a spank' |