Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy
Ypm1 chapter 1 . 11/3/2022
The comment before mine had me wondering if I should read this recommended fic after all, and I’m happy that I ignored it and read on. Sweet happy fic with family fluff and love. I couldn’t put it down.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2022
DNF. I can't bring myself to go beyond half a chapter. I feel like this chapter is making a carticature out of women having a choice in their bodies. A teen pregnancy is a harrowing experience and not one to be brushed aside. And Pansy not being motherly as a result is also natural. But instead of handling this with even a modicum of empathy or subtlety, it just portrays Pansy as a whiny bitch. Also, Draco's reactions to her are quite demeaning. Like when she's feeling unwell from her pregnancy and he just tells her that she's giving him a headache. I have no idea how this story is popular.
HSkarsgard chapter 25 . 10/4/2022
Read this in a day. Glad they got their HEA
princess.saffron chapter 14 . 9/15/2022
I struggle to see this chapter realistically. only because after suffering a trauma I don't know if Hermione would be down for what happens after. however I enjoy the rest of the story so far
minimar chapter 25 . 7/11/2022
aaaaw, my heart is melting!thank you for this absolutely wonderful story!
I loved each cgapter a loooot!
minimar chapter 15 . 7/10/2022
ouchie, ouch ,:D
minimar chapter 15 . 7/10/2022
oh, I would love to have a mouthcleansing spell ln hand in mornings!
minimar chapter 14 . 7/10/2022
yes, yes yeeeeees!
minimar chapter 12 . 7/10/2022
aaae, such a tease!
minimar chapter 11 . 7/10/2022
ooh, please please some hot scene would be incredible !
minimar chapter 8 . 7/10/2022
didnhe not eat breakfast?! :D :D
minimar chapter 8 . 7/10/2022
farts and quickies are spontaneous:D :D
minimar chapter 5 . 7/9/2022
oh my sweet Helga! he just asks like that? :D
crystalrdavis1995 chapter 25 . 6/19/2022
Fantastic story. I obsessively read it over three days and found your writing seamless. Great story.
rohanbee chapter 11 . 6/6/2022
there's actually ALOT of research that points to physical punishment being extremely detrimental to a child's development. even 'juist a spank'
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