Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() well so far i love it. Pansy is a bitch. please continue as soon as you can. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() nice chapter like the name! how long is the story going to be do you think? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it so far so good keep the good work up woah pansy is really such a bitch...she only cares bout her looks not even her OWN son still it suits her lol i love that song...well when you reposting? |
![]() ![]() ![]() O I love this so far, hope u can ud soon :) btw pans is such a bitch my gawd! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMGSH I WANT TO READ MORE! you did a great job with the start of this, PANSY IS THE BIGGEST BITCH I'VE EVER SEEN, great job and update soon! . |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG,OMG,OMG, ARE YOU REALLY THAT AMAZING! You're gonna have THREE amazing stories going at the same time while I can't even manage to make time to review recently. I'm so sorry about that by the way. After this I'm gonna go back and review all the crap I've read but not given feedback on. I feel terrible. I'm such a bad fan! Anyways... Great start! I love how your characters differ slightly each time, yet Pansy still stays the same old slut and Draco still hates her. That ALWAYS makes my day. And Narcissa, though always different, is never an evil, conniving b*. Which is also great. I love how you wrote Draco here, and I love the intro to this new romance. More DracoXHermione! Are you ever gonna write another HermioneXSirius story? Or maybe even another Deitist story? Sorry. Not trying to give you too much work. You're wonderful, you know, updating so much? Keep it up. And I LOVE the name Zane. LOVE it SO much. It's just great. And perfect for Draco's son. I love him already! He seems so cute. A miniature Draco with slightly darker hair? He is gonna be SO incredible hot when he grows up!(maybe even hotter than Draco, but that's just me, I like darker hair) He seems so perfectly adorable! If Draco didn't love him so much and wasn't so cute about it, I would want to steal him away! And Pansy is a terrible mother and just a terrible PERSON for not loving him too. I ALREADY love him! After 1 chapter. Put more up soon. Your devoted but terribly lazy fan(I'll be better), Allison |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey great idea i love it already ! :D cant wait for the next chapter to see wat appens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am looking forward to it... update soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() good start! keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really enjoyed your story and i can't wait for the next chap. well have a wonderful week. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() liking it so far :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() A love it so far! I love it when Draco is a carrying father! Update soon! Bye Bye n.k |
![]() ![]() YAY! Oh man, GREAT story- update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it its good so far |