Reviews for A Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy
1649 chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
well so far i love it. Pansy is a bitch. please continue as soon as you can.
QueenoftheClumsyDorks chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
Great story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
sequence to destruction chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
nice chapter like the name! how long is the story going to be do you think?
schnappi-schnape chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
i like it

so far so good

keep the good work up

woah pansy is really such a bitch...she only cares bout her looks not even her OWN son

still it suits her

lol

i love that song...well when you reposting?
Draco's Princess 92 chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
O I love this so far, hope u can ud soon :)

btw pans is such a bitch my gawd!
SongbirdSarah chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
OMGSH I WANT TO READ MORE! you did a great job with the start of this, PANSY IS THE BIGGEST BITCH I'VE EVER SEEN, great job and update soon! .
40steps2themoon chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
OMG,OMG,OMG, ARE YOU REALLY THAT AMAZING! You're gonna have THREE amazing stories going at the same time while I can't even manage to make time to review recently. I'm so sorry about that by the way. After this I'm gonna go back and review all the crap I've read but not given feedback on. I feel terrible. I'm such a bad fan!

Anyways...

Great start! I love how your characters differ slightly each time, yet Pansy still stays the same old slut and Draco still hates her. That ALWAYS makes my day. And Narcissa, though always different, is never an evil, conniving b*. Which is also great. I love how you wrote Draco here, and I love the intro to this new romance. More DracoXHermione! Are you ever gonna write another HermioneXSirius story? Or maybe even another Deitist story? Sorry. Not trying to give you too much work. You're wonderful, you know, updating so much? Keep it up.

And I LOVE the name Zane. LOVE it SO much. It's just great. And perfect for Draco's son. I love him already! He seems so cute. A miniature Draco with slightly darker hair? He is gonna be SO incredible hot when he grows up!(maybe even hotter than Draco, but that's just me, I like darker hair) He seems so perfectly adorable! If Draco didn't love him so much and wasn't so cute about it, I would want to steal him away! And Pansy is a terrible mother and just a terrible PERSON for not loving him too. I ALREADY love him! After 1 chapter. Put more up soon.

Your devoted but terribly lazy fan(I'll be better),

Allison
ONIX-21 chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
hey great idea i love it already ! :D

cant wait for the next chapter to see wat appens next!
Lady Sarai Black chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
I am looking forward to it... update soon?
Beautiful Screams of Heartache chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
good start! keep writing!
Baby.Bunny418 chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
i really enjoyed your story and i can't wait for the next chap. well have a wonderful week. )
hermdrayreturns chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
liking it so far :-D
FF1575 chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
A love it so far! I love it when Draco is a carrying father! Update soon!

Bye Bye

n.k
Bumble Bumble chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
YAY! Oh man, GREAT story- update soon!
Lbonshire chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
i like it its good so far
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