|Reviews for Thorns|
| Sailor Pandabear chapter 1 . 8/5
| tomorrow4eva chapter 1 . 6/25
I've always enjoyed this story. I like Fletcher and his group. The gargoyle/griffin stuff is cool too.
| UnLike Us chapter 1 . 6/21
Wonderfull story. Great side character. The SOLDIERS and Simon were very interesting. Never quite understood what the gargooyal/ demon was, but whatever. Love the Cloud monologue/dialogue. Zack was great. Loved the Griffin behaviorisms. Like where you ended the story.
And Sorry for this review. I don't normally write reviews like this but I'm not really in the mood to write right now. But I would like to right one in a show of appreciation, because I really enjoyed your story. Additionally, I know that if I put of writing this for any longer I might never end up posing one. SO here you go! and thanks again.
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 6/18
I just love this. So long and well written. Also I grew up watching Gargoyles.
| Hikaru Hoshino chapter 1 . 5/31
This strory is awesome!
Is there any chance of it getting a sequel?
Because it realy needs one. It's like you ended on a cliffhander (I think that's how you write it), yoi just made me want even more to know what happens next!
So please, please write a sequel!
Or if not you, at least someone else.
Ps sorry if there's any errors, I'm Italian.
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 1 . 3/28
I really liked this, it was very detailed but at the same time abstract in places.
It is definitely something I will comeback and read in the future X3
| Jothra chapter 1 . 3/8
This is still my favorite FVII fic, even years on.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/25
You really should write a follow up. And put Tifa in it. Because she is badass. (And fell/ will fall into the life stream by accident). And while I admit that I ship Cloti, Tifa-Aerith friendship gives me life (or you could go for an Ot4 haha).
| Akayuki Novak chapter 1 . 1/25
*quietly dies* Oh mine gosh, this is too cool for words. Just... so amazing. Hugs want to be had. Feels want to be shared. So cool. /So/ cool.
| Lang Krista chapter 1 . 1/20
Really nice one-shot, wish there were more to it. I even liked the OCs, where usually I hate them.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/13
THIS CAN'T BE THE END.
I- JUST- TOO- GAH!
THIS IS TOO WONDERFUL AND PRECIOUS AND BRILLIANT AND INCREDIBLE AND EVERY OTHER SYNONYM OUT THERE.
I NEED MORE.
I NEED TO CHECK OUT FFVII.
BY THE LOOKS OF THIS FANFIC IT SEEMS SO COOL.
WHY AM I USING CAPS.
ANYWAY THIS IS TOO AMAZING AND AWESOME TO BE DESCRIBED IN WORDS.
I'M GONNA READ IT AGAIN AND AGAIN.
THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS PIECE OF BRILLIANCE.
| Brenden chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
| silverheartlugia2000 chapter 1 . 12/10/2015
Oh my god! This is so beautiful! I love a good mutation fic but this is downright art! The flow, the oc sidestories, the change in perspectives is a bit disoreantating with how often it happens without warning at first but you catch onto it easier as you keep reading. I'm honestly amazed you shoved this all into a one shot rather than break into chapters. And jeez I figured cloud was just a bit nocturnal for some reason and I did keep trying to picture griffons with fangs and leather/fur wings but god damn the gargoyles thing just flew over my head till that note! (At least they don't turn to stone that's a plusXD but then again do the 'home made' gargoyles even have the stone magic in the show..? Don't think they ever said..) I almost wish this would continue, into the whole adventure or just in bits cause these mako spike bros are so cool! But seeing how much work you put into a scene that was probably like five minutes long (not counting the cc version) that might end up frying somethingXD
| DaringSteel chapter 1 . 11/19/2015
I just made an account on FFN, so I'm coming here to leave my review. This is one of the best FFVII fanfics I've ever read - possibly the best, definitely in the top 10. The easiest way to fully express all my feelings about this would probably be to write them up and provide a link to the resulting document, but I'll try to distill it.
I love the OCs and their relationships. Especially the relationships. "Hunting compatibility" - gaaah, I can't tell you how much I love that line and how it's the bottom line for all the major relationships here (except maybe Zack & Aeris. Maybe) - not just with Simon and Fletcher or Zack and Cloud, but how Deveraux wasn't hunting compatible with _anybody_. I needed these kind of non-romantic but still caring relationships more than I realized. Side note: I also read Simon as played by Mark Ruffalo, and Fletcher as played by a more experienced John Sheppard.
Cloud's (and Zack's) gargoyle transformation, and the fact that you did your research / knew your biology well enough to explain it, makes my science critic very happy. Not a perfect explanation, but of course it wouldn't be - he's explaining it to soldiers. Also: Finally, someone else writing stuff on the internet who knows what Hox genes are and doesn't just handwave away radical biological transformations. I love you for that.
Aeris being so accepting and cool and welcoming her boyfriend and his friend back, showing them love and care even after they've been off the map for years and gotten turned into gargoyles. Some other author might have had the love interest hold it against them. Some other character might have come across as unrealistically nice. But no, you know your Aeris and she is perfectly in-character.
Finally: Kitten Zack. KITTEN ZACK. ZACK AND CLOUD AS KITTENS. GGYYAAAGGHHH.
| Penguinlord352 chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
Absolutely amazing. This is everything I wanted to see in a 'Zack Lives' story and more! And you have things set up so wonderfully for the future, it's just...gah! I just wish you'd included Cloud reuniting with Tifa in this. Brilliant from start to finish!