|Reviews for Pjcool's THE SHINING|
| slpytlak chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
You must be Erin's boyfriend. I was surprised that I didn't even know that she has a boyfriend.
| The Shadow Syndicate chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
So you are the freind Erin was telling us about.
Welcome to the parody club my freind.
Out of curiousity are you parodying the Stanley Kubrick version or the Stephen King version of the movie?
| Evil Riggs chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
The text itself is fairly solid, but I have to kind of question the whole spirit of the endeavor. If you're going to cut out the "mature" scenes, what scenes do you intend to cut? Certainly the woman in the bathtub, but what about Halloran getting an axe in the chest? What about the dark, unnerving conversation in the bathroom? It's all relative, man. It's all relative.
As a general stylistic suggestion, you should probably delete the author's notes within the text. They really don't give us any information we need and tend to disupt the flow of a story.
| Movie-Brat chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
You're the parodying The Shining? Cool, but I'm curious about one thing, why remove the "mature" scenes?