Reviews for That One Week in October
xxguesswhoxx chapter 2 . 8/30/2008
lolz! XD i loved it
Sighcoe chapter 2 . 8/8/2008
very well done! this is so cool! really great story! hehehe~
Valentine Satiguss chapter 2 . 7/2/2008
Hahahahaha.

That was just so cute!
False-Image chapter 2 . 5/7/2008
Aw! How cute! It'd be great if you could make a multi-chapter story about this situation. I'd definitely read it )
Laegdin chapter 2 . 4/21/2008
This was a great story, especially the way in which things are seen from the perspective of the other employees. Loved the idea of the design dept panicking when Shikamaru is fired, only to end up taking bets. Hehe.

A few typos here and there, but I thought the pacing was well done. The story kept moving forward very nicely.

Good luck with your writing.
anon chapter 2 . 4/20/2008
It was beautiful! Absolutely wonderful! (throws cookies) You deserve a million cookies (or something equally sweet). I loved the way this fic is written. Good work. XD
smile365 chapter 2 . 3/31/2008
absolutely amazing. i think i'm in some sort of shock because it was just that good! i really enjoyed your style of writing, not too choppy but not too lengthy and detailed. thank you so much! i must check if you've written other fanfics. :)
xSayuri-sanx chapter 2 . 3/30/2008
WAHAHAHAAHHA that was amazing! XD
Krazy Naoko chapter 2 . 3/20/2008
I loved it! mentioned much less than the Uchiha, Naruto is still the main char here!

Krazy Naoko
hollowsmile chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
this story is so good! you shoud write one about how they fell in love
Valheru1988 chapter 2 . 2/25/2008
Nice... i love this fic... and i knew Naruto stayed with Itachi as soon as you mentioned the fact that the American branch had an especially good week while Sasuke's office in Japan was bad. lol

Love the fic... hm i want to see Sasuke light Itachi's car on fire :) lol Great fic and keep up the good work on future fics.
Almost chapter 2 . 2/22/2008
I liked it! So cute and Sasuke was a little off of his character but it was great!
yingyingyang chapter 2 . 2/16/2008
Aww...That's so sweet! The thought of Sasuke setting Itachi's car on fire is halarious.
ojuzu chapter 2 . 2/4/2008
Aw. So cute!

Lilz
TooDarnLazy chapter 2 . 2/4/2008
a really sweet story... :-)

i love how you made Naruto the point of contact for everyone; how he was the one who brought everyone together. that's such a Naruto-ish thing :-) and the way his absence makes everyone grumpy and throws the whole company into hell made me smile, especially the part where Shikamaru gets fired and re-hired every year. that's really funny :-D

it's just so sweet how Sasuke worries and cares so much about Naruto that he gets into a foul mood, and how everything brightens up again when Naruto returns.

i quite like your writing style, though there were a few small mistakes here and there that were probably typos. still, lovely story! :-)

p.s. your Itachi's really cool, too! hahaha XD
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