Reviews for The House Which Time Forgot
BettyBoopSweden chapter 18 . 1/8/2011
I really, really love your Snape. He is such a grouch and tries to be stern and frightening, but he just show how much he care.

I love Vampyr, what a good babysitter. The epilouge is the perfect ending, I love it. Nothing is good to the grouch but at the same time he love it all. Amazing. Snape from the beginning is totally crazy but I understand his confused feelings about Harry. He loved Lily and hated James and Harry is a mix of them both. I can see Snape not wanting to care but he can not stop his feelings.

You portraited both of them perfectly and it kept me wanting to know what happen next.

Thank you!

BettyBoopSweden chapter 5 . 1/7/2011
Whats wrong with Snape? He must have some kind of mental problem because he behaves really strange. I find this story very fascinating and can't stop reading. So strange and I feel so sorry for Harry.

I hate CP and usually I don't read stories with it in it. I am from a country where spanking is illegal and have been since before I was born and to me spanking is abuse and I don't think that it is ok to hit your children. But in this story it really works. I see that it is a part of Snapes character and I have no problem with it because it fits the story.

BettyBoopSweden chapter 3 . 1/7/2011
I know that this is a finished story and all but I just wanted to comment on the fact that you gets mixed reviews. I just want to say that you can't please everybody and of course you can write whatever you like. I really, really love the two first chapters and I'm sure I will love this too. I reviewed before I read just because I wanted to say how much I like this.

Do I like mean Snape? Of course not but it is interesting to see different sides of him. Snape is my favourite character and I love nice Snape but also sometimes a mean Snape. I can't wait to see where this story goes!

gaben chapter 18 . 12/27/2010
Great story. Loved every chapter. Scary first couple but a fluffy end. Well done love the banter and snide nasty comments of Snape and the naughty Harry .
Cammie chapter 18 . 12/26/2010
I think I'm on the verge of tears. Awesome story!
The Snidget's Fwooper chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Surely Snape can't be this evil?

If that ever happened to me Snape wouldn't be able to walk...much less breathe! A kick here and there would set him straight and a couple punches to the face! Yeah!

*Laughs Manically*
deletedaccount10000 chapter 18 . 12/23/2010
I've got just three words...I LOVE YOU! And the story too! I just love how the story progresses from the 2 of them hating each other to mutual love. Although I do think that at first Snape was a little..ok a lot...OK too...OK OK WAY too strict with Harry, you made me cry when Snape threw Harry out! I actually thought that something happened to make Snape Hate melted my heart..for real! All in all I loved this story and for Christ's sake...write a book,will ya'?
Jennie Wilson chapter 18 . 12/3/2010
:) That was an interesting story. I havent quite read something like this before. I love the way you wrote Harry, you had me almost crying with him at points. I also laughed soo much at some of the things in this story. I love the 'pretending' very very good. Well Done
inkbolt93 chapter 18 . 10/10/2010
awww- as much as I was weary about this story at the start i've loved it! Who was the girl though? Ginny i'm assuming :) Good job on this story! I'm away to read all the other ones! xxx
Silene-Ashikawa chapter 18 . 8/28/2010
Epilog was great, I had so much laugh in it XD Story was fine too, I still adore your writing skills. "A Time and Place to..." is more in my taste, though, specially that I was confused most of the time - Snape really was acting like he lost his mind and should be locked up, another time he was sweet, and another mean... and I was a little suprice that Harry still wanted to stay there although he said day before he didn't want to or because all this talk about his mother... or even cellar episode. I did really hate him for that, how could he maid kid (even if it's this kid) sick by putting him in such place, uh! And all Snapes tantrums (cos it's best way to call it) and speaking about his father or his own miserable... I didn't think he would do that, taking all his frustration on child that he kidnapped (and that was wow to :P).
Jimbocous chapter 18 . 8/16/2010
Very disturbing story, in many regards. Clearly Snape was over the edge, and from the epilogue it seems as though he never came back. Strange stuff, but overall a fascinating read.
perfidiouspink chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
That was so horrible that I can't even read the rest of this. But I guess kudos to you for writing an effectively disturbing piece.
ILoveHarryJamesPotter chapter 18 . 7/9/2010
Pretty awesome! I really liked it (my second time read!). Hope you write more! ) I really like the young Harry picturisation and the way you wrote Snape - some of the things he said were hilarious!
SnapesYukuai chapter 5 . 6/4/2010
Nice idea and now I'm more curious than ever about Sev's intentions. Will they ever be explained? Well, I think I'll call it a night for now, your Melfis.

P.s. I can't wait to read, if Snape finds out about the dragon or the letter but for now my tired eyes win. "
SnapesYukuai chapter 4 . 6/4/2010
Hmm, I have two theories of why Harry is with Snape: My first is that Dumbledore made him take him in as the beginning of the letter could suggest. The second it that Sape did it because of the Dursley's and either isn't happy with that arrangement or has his very own reasons for making Harry do all these things.

I'm very curious about that fact.

Your Melfis.
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