Reviews for The Color Black
Saismaat chapter 2 . 1/1/2010
very nice!
Destiny McNeil chapter 2 . 4/22/2008
This is a good story are you going to write more
xXKoutaValentineXx chapter 2 . 1/1/2008
W-O-W... I mean- W-O-W...

that was just...

W-O-W...
KrisEleven chapter 2 . 11/23/2007
hehehe. I liked that chapter.
KrisEleven chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
Interesting, but I have no idea when this is, where it is. Thats kind of throwing me off. Riddick seems a little OC.

Great writing style, and I love this ship. :) Keep writing!
Kannibal Klehmenteen chapter 2 . 11/17/2007
You need to proofread better.

The spelling errors take away from the story. You should read it out loud before you post it. Spell check doesn't catch added or subtracted letters, as long as the new word is still a word.

And I like the story.
SG1987 chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
This is very interesting indeed. I look forward to see where this is going. So is Kyra really Jack or what's up with that? I can't wait for the next chapter!
nonhalema chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
This isn't finished? Well I hope it ain't...good work
Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
...a game of cat and mouse? ;)
Death's Obsession chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Is this a one-shot? Just curious, but this is pretty interesting and a little confusing I think but still good.

Jess
Kannibal Klehmenteen chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
I like it.

I /always/ like your stuff.

But it is much more sentimental and mushy than your usual stories.

I am not sure which style I like better.

And I think I know why there is less boy related angst in your writing...

Haha.

You know you love me,

Klehmenteen.