Reviews for Thoughts Can Be Dangerous
hopelessfreakz chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
Why u don't continue this one9 :'(
Good plot i think. Many pov for mai and naru..
Pls reconsider this, until they get married maybe :D xixixi
Lilly Moon chapter 2 . 12/1/2008
I really liked this. I love knowing the views of other characters in a story. I hope you update soon. Maybe you could put in a chapter about what Lin thought when he told Mia he hated the Japanese.
Hesunohana chapter 2 . 5/26/2008
just Madoka-like ! funny !
Kyia Star chapter 2 . 11/17/2007
Umm... no offense meant, but I'm not sure how this is introspective- or any form of spective. I mean, we see thoughts, yes, but they're not a reflection of a character- which would be an extrospective and retrospective respectively as introspective is an internal look at one's own self.

Madoka knows why Naru hired Mai. She knew all along. Just as she knows exactly why Naru is really in Japan.

Still, I do like the sarcastic, nasty side of Madoka! XD
Irma.Arisa.Laye chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
well,,.. :)

that was cute,.,. ;)

but a bit sad and cowardly on Naru's part! :D


but still,.,. great story! ;D
Kyia Star chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Spoiler! In the last of the Evil Spirits novels, (before the beginning of the White Heart series) just after they found Eugene's body, Mai confessed her feelings to Naru. Naru had virtually no reaction and proceeded to ask if she loved him, or Gene. Mai started crying.

Truly an idiot scientist, yes?

It's an interesting look into his mind, though. _ Not too bad for an introspective piece.
Nollypoo chapter 1 . 11/8/2007


Uh, sorry.

Please update soon! I wanna see more!