|Reviews for Homecoming|
| byurside chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Interesting. I've always wondered why the reunion took that long...
Just one question came up though. With talk about the "Flame-haired Wanderer" going around, wouldn't such gossip eventually reach Tear and the rest? Surely, at least Jade would've been curious about that, especially concerning the wording of it.
All in all, it was rather good. You probably have a good idea going on here, so you might want to expand on what Luke had been doing all that time.
| Laurie Jo chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Oh my God... someone needs to write a fanfic about Luke spending a year away after the fall of Eldrant. It would be fantastic!
I hate to pick at little details in such a wonderful fanfic (I loved your work by the way), but Luke doesn't spend 3 years away. The events in the game take two years and his disappearance one.
| darkangel.mya chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Aw that was cute. You have a really nice writing style. It's not overly wordy while still painting a beautiful picture of the scene and emotions of the characters. You did a good job of getting into Luke's mind frame.