Reviews for Broken Hearts, Shattered Dreams |
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![]() ![]() ![]() These God-Mother-Fucking-Damned ONIONS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story this story right here is absolutely fantastic the ending was perfect and had me tear up and cry a little bit and that just make me enjoy this story all the more. absolutely fantastic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic fic. Loved it and honest, that last chapter had me tearing up a bit good shit bro. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know that the story is excellent when your crying at the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A classic Pudgypudge ending. Thank you for this joy to read, I loved it. I believe I'll be reading Master of the Zanbatous next. |
![]() ![]() when before meeting the others boss of the reams Naruto and ion had get to working on a old house in the west part of the fox ream was former house of the old fox king before Naruto , when going over the art on the wall is of the fox god ruler , when took out the art and get it sold off and the books room Naruto and ion keeping as it is now , when being in a gold and black books of Naruto old made out passing teen stuff like grils friends and lovers Naruto was doing back as a body huther and running 2 spy net workings , his own spy networking made out slaves he get out the land sand evil city west east out port , Naruto bund it down kill off the rich men and woman who rulers of it and then the mines , when gold bars over 590-099987 to 4000980-098 he keeping it and money too , like he doing with the art of old fox king had Naruto doing it to the art it the evil city , when then books and scrolls Naruto find out was former whirlpool stuff he had the evil long white hair bead men own cut off head had more swords cutting to the head now , when now it is had a death mask now, on the wall now in his home office den now, as well is a paly boy bunny gril own pic now some woman into it is missy in a black and white looking now, when put it no the wall now to right side and the death mask to the east now, when his wife had her home office too and the bed room is super bed now and on the end thing is art pics of the be marring now , on the lower floor is others pics of old ninjas teams 7 and 10 , when Naruto own team and some on abut black ops days and old abut black ops masks Naruto had his fox and black wolf and last one is gold fox with caps rack into it end now , when ions is the same pig and hog and cap rank on wild cat , when keeping her mom and dad pic with her as a little gril in the flower shop , when then 2 need some time for each other Naruto had walking out and find a old used house in east city he get his own men cave den a former inn he get owner ship of and like his old men cave office back home it is the same way of art no the wall now, red and blue and black jackets and vests both same ways of his jackets and old ninjas vests and some time he keeping the ninjas vast in glass cases on the wall now, bed on the 1 floor and too the west a books sets now, art on the wall came form his time of be a pawn shop fan and used a mob boss money he took back in his abut black ops time and he had it now , when ion had her woman cave out in a tool shed and she was good with it and think back to her time it the old flower shop she one before on the top of it she had one before when she had in it grils pic of her ex fan grils days , and when it be find by her dad too, he pic and let her get too, bund the box now, of pics she had love Naruto , |
![]() ![]() when Naruto and ion had a under barrciks house in the whirlpool and when it was 1 a spy net working ops and Naruto had help so much more of ex ninjas and abut black ops name roots to get out of the land of fire and get to the west and others lands in the past ,when used his money form the now kill off mob boss own co and when it money and gold be helping out too, Naruto even get ROCKFORD LEROY out the ex cap of his ex wife own mother in law ship cap tune law men tune ex cop for some help out like co-s stuff to abut black ops roots own evil stuff too, it help out too some the gold bars of 12 and money too Naruto get it now, it get sarkura mom co off his back and the gray men co a big running now, Naruto had then let his son and step sister and brother one day get the co , when he siting in the co office and get a will in now, as for some others stuff he let his son get is money and gold too, when Naruto his wife ion and them kid was going now , his son get the will and read it now, was odd and happy now the gray men co is his and step brother and sister now, when he took the role of COE and chir men no now both his step brother is vice chir men and COF and her as PAR , when each had the wood cutting and sell wood and the 3 made a more money form it now, when the twins had them clan house now and he in the new clan house be put up now, he living in the sun up house now, |
![]() ![]() ![]() No matter how many times I read this story the ending always brings tears to my eyes and that is what makes you know that it was a great story. |
![]() ![]() MR PUDGYPUDE SIR i Robert Krause had to ask why was going on with the lord of fire is he going get his own end for why he did to Naruto and co , and if i was doing it Naruto was to be king of the fox s and running the ninjas vaillge ,3 he well had 2 wife s ion his queen and 2 wife and then his ex wife she well be marring to him ,as for the fire lord own 1 son well took over and he had the money to made a ninjas vaillge only a new one west part when the founder and his brother came form and his to name the new HOKAGE ROY fox a ninjas warrior form the lands of snow , who had made a new one the son of HOKAGE suskie own son , the new stone looking men and woman on it the founder his brother and 3 and 4 and then 5 going over to ROY FOX and then Susie own kid , when the bad one get his own be put in the v of the end on the bones of the sound vaillge 5 and the founder of the sound vaillge own body and looking now, |
![]() ![]() when before Naruto and ion had get back home the 2 had made a new den /office Naruto had made for his own used ,unpack old team pic on the west wall now ,2is his ex wife and son and him it 20 years old , some old ninjas team pic is Naruto old team , when the 3 is abut black ops team and some abut black mask fox wolf and hog . when each is now on the wall now, when old vest 3 of them now, each had time on them , and some old swords twins of them , battle axe and dagger axe and some old daggers of his dad had , and some of moon stone now, his own now, when the back room Naruto had made now old weopns 2 super size swords and axe and some others form the bad guys and old rings and even the sound vaillge frouder had , when then he lock it now, when ion had office woman cave in now, when the top floor is house now Naruto and ion had made it now, 4 bed rooms and living room now, gold and blue wall now, old ninjas head art bans be put on the wall now, Naruto and ion had get to sleep for when now, Naruto had ask his top officers if the old king may had a house some old house west parts now, a clan lands the old king keeping it now, a super size house Naruto made into a super books room for the fox s to used now , when walking by it is2 woman who had keeping it away and one boy , when now Naruto and ion had find a old sea cave and it was good to keeping it now, working on made it home now, 5 bed rooms and living room now, and gust room too, when keeping a men cave den room for him to used and her own woman cave now, |
![]() ![]() ![]() where the fuck is the fight scene :( |
![]() ![]() this was good |
![]() ![]() when Naruto and his wife queen ion had get them stuff pack up both the old offices and bed rooms and them kid bed room now pack up now, when then both had be going out now, Naruto had rule the fox for a long time and he had be about seeing stuff form new lands and vaillge s be made and lost some too, one time his 1 son own kid and his own had move to the whirlpool and rule it now, wen his kid step sister is living with them and running the fox team now, like her old men she had 4 stars now, and helping the whirlpool now, |
![]() ![]() when in the fox reams Naruto had his office now a super size office in now a meeting with the top officers and others over stuff need to doing with , when Naruto unpack his stuff now , a books set of the old made out books black and gold and then green and red and some others ones he doing before one was on body huters and abut black ops days , his old abut black ops mask a fox and wolf and tame pics the 1 is his old ninjas team , 7 ,the 2 is Naruto old team outlands , with him as team comer , the abut black tame and 2 one is Naruto cap , now, his old cap rack , when 2 old pics his 1 is with ex wife and ex team mat , and ion and him and son in it , both sit on his desk , as well some old clan pics his mom and dad clan , when on the west part now is of the lord of former sown , back in her black burry suit , and #5 on it, Naruto find it in a pawn shop back then his was a book arout and was trying to doing his looking with a big red and black pram, looking and hat had a big whiter f, with black now, his time with it now was cool , when now , it was now in the same way now, he was sill doing books , as a side show and keeping his ways and thinks good, when in the fox king old house Naruto had made a back house into his new books room , and bed room now, the old fox body armoe body now, and 3 swords too, Naruto had seeing it now, was his dad clan log into the chest now, fire to it now, |
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