|Reviews for Child of Light|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
I'm sorry, but I'm going to be a bit of a wet towel here. Please stop using so many ellipsis. I normally don't put in any critical reviews for a fanfic, but if you are aiming to become a published author, you need to use correct punctuation.
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/24/2012
Please I am on the end of my seat waiting for the next chapter please I want to know what happens with the fight between naruto and damine
| Sir Thames chapter 10 . 1/27/2012
Nice story, luv. Carry on.
| sky is the limet chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
um i just wanted to give u an idea if you dont mind i just an idea so u dont have to take it wepons that the swords turn into the
Katana of Light
whip of water
chain and sickle of earth
staff of wind
claws of fire
this is just some ideas you dont have to use them there just some ideas
oh and please update soon
| ooblah chapter 10 . 1/17/2012
nice story but u forget to add other ppls swords and u should make them use ninja skills too.
| adngo714 chapter 9 . 1/17/2012
so based on this chapter, everyone's swords can upgrade, then caan I suggest giving Hinata a bow and arrow, Sasuke a double sword, Sakura two short swords, and Shikamaru a giant Great Sword?
| adngo714 chapter 7 . 1/17/2012
you forgot Sasuke in the team announcements...
| adngo714 chapter 5 . 1/17/2012
Shikamaru didn't summo9n his sword, he should use a grezt sword...btw all these weapon change suggestions...you don't have o follow...also Light sounds too common, call Light Hikari, which means light in Japanese.
| adngo714 chapter 4 . 1/17/2012
as much as I dislike Sakura, as the wind guardian, she should hsve two mini-swords...
| adngo714 chapter 3 . 1/17/2012
Sasuke likes himself? Sasuke should have received a double sword, one sword on each side...
| adngo714 chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
Hnata, as the waater guardian...I don't think a sword would fit her...
| adngo714 chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
why doesn't Hinata cal Naruto her Naruto-kun?
| hot dog285 chapter 10 . 1/17/2012
lay off of the Deus Ex Machina, and the Enemy Mine, dear sweet lord, someone needs to gte you to Tvtropes.
| JJB88 chapter 10 . 1/16/2012
| JJB88 chapter 9 . 1/16/2012