That was absolutely fantastic. Thank you for such a lovely story.

BRILLIANT start!

I just started this today and I LOVE it! It's amazing, and I'm not even half way done. I love how easy it is for me to relate myself with the characters, especially the part with Namine saying "All the other girls were busy dating boys and putting on make-up". I hate make up and have been asked if I was gay several times (since Im a girl and 14).

Where did you get the idea for this plot? It's what makes the story so addictive. honestly, I think all the oddballs want someone like Axel to came and offer to take them to a different world. That's the other thing that makes this addictive: how easy people relate to Roxas' feelings. I'm so glad you still write and will definitely check out your other stories after I finish crying when this one is over.

Wow. I read this whole fic in three days, because it was so good I couldn't stop. :) Amazing.

OMG! I JUST FINISHED THIS STORY RIGHT NOW AND LET ME SAY IT WAS AMAZING!

I'm sure you wrote this awhile ago but I just found it 3 days ago and haven't stop reading it! When It was time to turn my computer off (3AM, I would read until that time) I would then get in bed and keep reading on my phone! I seriously love this story! And because I was thinking about this story all the time I ended up having dreams with Axel and Roxas in them! xD Best dreams ever!

My favorite chapter was the one where they had their poker night! x3

Again let me tell you how much I love this story and how much I love you for writing it! 333333333333333333333333

AWESOME STORYYYYYYYY!

ok, this story's making me think of the truman show. Should that be happening?

I have slowly, slowly come to realize that I am entirely waay too addicted to your fanfiction. After reading Water, I didn't think I'd find a story that I loved that much in your collection. Then I gave this one a chance. Instead of proclaiming how much I love it (which I do) and how amazing a writer you are (which you are), I'm going to post some of my real-time reactions to this story that I had with my friends over skype.

[6:14:22 PM] (Nyan~): Page

[6:14:27 PM] (Nyan~): A fanfiction raped my brain

[6:16:09 PM] (Nyan~): Like, worse than normal

[6:16:09 PM] Page: oh snap!

[6:16:54 PM] (Nyan~): Like, the main character is controlled by a computer, smashed his boyfriend's leg up so he couldn't follow, and just self-mutilated to get a computer core back

[6:17:06 PM] Page: ...what?

[6:17:32 PM] (Nyan~): And then the person that attempted to rape him came, but because he saved the computer core, the computer possessng the main character likes him.

[6:17:34 PM] (Nyan~): X_X

[6:17:41 PM] (Nyan~): BRAIN BROKEN. WHY CAN I NOT STOP READING?

[7:30:31 PM] (Nyan~): It was Roxas, btw

[7:30:46 PM] (Nyan~): his boyfriend is Axel, who originally saved him from the computer program

[7:30:56 PM] (Nyan~): Shit happens

[7:31:00 PM] (Nyan~): SO MUCH SHIT HAPPENS

[7:31:01 PM] Beach: Is this the fic you recommended to me?

[7:31:11 PM] (Nyan~): It is a gargantuan level of shit that happens.

[7:31:18 PM] (Nyan~): NO

[7:31:21 PM] (Nyan~): _

[7:31:24 PM] (Nyan~): _

[7:31:28 PM] (Nyan~): MAYBE

[7:31:50 PM] Beach: Uh huh

[7:36:57 PM] (Nyan~): Need moar fanfiction

[7:38:38 PM] (Nyan~): Oh well

[7:38:46 PM] (Nyan~): At least I have half a chapter left of this story.

[7:43:11 PM] Beach: Iiiinteresting :3

[7:51:25 PM] Nyan~): I finished the fanfiction... *mope mope mope*

[7:51:38 PM] (Nyan~): Now I have to write a review praising the ground this woman walks on.

I honestly don't know what to say. I was shocked at the amount of foresight and foreshadowing you put in your stories. Thanks for an absolutely fantastic read!

This story was AMAZING! Thank you.!

All I really can say is _WOW

This was really awesome story and it was awesome to read it ;D

First I thought this was just Roxas living in Twilight Town, blah blah blah the ordinary story, being a bit dumb (sorry, no offense) but then this turned out to be completely something else. I also realized how realistic Roxas actually was (as a person, I mean), because I bet almost anyone would be pretty slow too if put into a situation like Rox'.

Somewhere in the middle I had completely changed my mind of the story, even if didn't have the slightest idea where the story was going, except it had me fully hooked. I just couldn't stop reading :D

It was not until in the end when everything was revealed that I understood all the little clues hidden in the story and got the full picture. Along the way I had all kind of hypothesis of where everyhting would lead to but they all ended up being wrong.

It was just fantastic read a story so long and entertaining that I dont't know what else to say except: Thank You

Hi there! I usually review a little earlier on, but I felt the need to read the entire thing! i loved loved loved loved LOVED this story! great work!

"Your Twilight Town isn't real, Roxas. It's part of a computer simulation. The real world is in Hollow Bastion… outside of this program."

Well sh*t, I was just kidding with my lame Matrix joke in an earlier review, but it looks like I was a lot closer than I thought! I can't wait to see what the real world(s) are like. I do wonder why Namine wanted to get to Roxas, does she have the hots for him? Or was she just chosen to get him out? And why does he need to get out in the first place (besides spending time with Axel, of course). There must be some ulterior motives all around...

Well this was a very intense chapter and I can't wait to get some of my questions answered!

"I'm not living a fantasy, Axel. It's you that's making me think of the fantasy."

"I can see what you're saying… But you've got it backwards, Roxas. Once you're out – that's when reality kicks in."

OMFG They're in the Matrix, aren't they? Is Roxas Neo? Is Axel really Morpheus? Sorry, I've been watching the Matrix trilogy on AMC. Your fic was recommended on TV Trope's Kingdom Hearts fanfic rec tab, which you may or may not know. So I am reading this and a few others. Your story is very intriguing so far and I have no idea where its going (I suck at solving mysteries). That's all for now!

You make me want to play KH2 again

Fucking awesome story. So full of depth and meticulously put together :)

You my friend, are a legend.

So going to reread this... You have made it to my all time favorites.