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Anticipation~!

I love all the tense moments. What's with Axel's family? I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow, didn't know you were going to start a new story so soon! I like how this story is starting, its almost like Roxas is back in that computer world, with Axel popping up every where.

I can tell something is going to happen when they go into the hanuted house. I think Axel will take Roxas away then, but I'm not the author so I don't really know whats going to happen ;p

Just wondering, will Sora or Riku or anyone else be in this story? Like Dem and Zex where in the last one?

Great start can't wait to see some more! *hugs* Re

Ahh noo but Kairi is going to kill him now, cos he broke the watch. she did say that, didn't she? Damn it, i'm still confused. i'm drowning in a torrent of confusion .. why does the watch always beep! where does he run off to! who IS Axel? how did he know that Roxas saw his shadow?

okay enough questions that probably won't be answered .. D awesome chapter, again. i couldn't tell it was written late at night, with you almost falling asleep.

I feel little like Roxas now - I really want to know what the deal with Axel is because it's driving me crazy. And I really feel for Hayner (which is a first for me) because, as fantastic Axel is, I'd be pissed off too if some guy came along and stole all of my best friend's attention.

P.S. My favourite part this chapter? Has to be when his father came home from work sick. Classic XD

i bloody love this!

it's getting intense.

update soon :D

Aw, Lauren-chan! that was wonderfierous! And Australia? How very cool! I have a friend named Bradley who lives there! ...And that was absolutly a total digression...Anyway

I loved it! Its a little past my bedtime but whatever! I love to stay up and read your stories! Now THERE is a sally sob story to tell your friends to school!

"*this is you* Oh! sob Theres this little american girl who sob sniffle shudder sneeze s-stays up EXTRA late to *sneeze* read m-my STORIES! WAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAA!"

LOL...

I cant wait to see another chapter from you Lauren-chan!

~Yuuko

uh oh! axel broke his watch. i don't think that that is good. woops. lolz!

that was amazing! i loved it! they're so adorable.

and you're still like the greatest writer ever. your updating skills are unrivaled! i love it!

update again as soon as you can! thanks for the quick update! :)

I realize you can't tell me now, but I still have to ask.

Does Axel have AIDS?

The watch going off all the time and him having to go right away...

I don't know, I used to be a huge fan of RENT, and the first time his watch goes off in this chapter, the words "AZT break"(I'm assuming that's one of the medications that helps with AIDS?) from La Vie Boheme popped into my head and I was like...damn. Axel's got AIDS.

But yeah. I see the Angst in the category description and...that's pretty angsty right there.

But again, I'm so completely in love with your writing and felt you deserved a review from me that wasn't just, "I love you, I cried," as even the most patient writer would want more than that for something as fabulous as the things you write.

Gawd I sound like such a kiss-ass. *sigh*

Katie

OH NOES~! hahahah Kairi ish going to eat Axel's face~! hahahha

That was great! I think I kind of know what's going on with Axel's family but only like... 5% probably. I wanna know! That was cute that Axel decided to stay Roxas! Now all he needs to do is push little Roxie up against the wall and make-out with him!

My brain is mush at the moment, but I'll try to submit a decent review. XD

So... uhm... Hayner was less of an ass this chapter. (Almost put episode...) I liked him more.

What else... Deadline broken. That can't be good.

Uh... Oh, and yeah, I am the one you hit with a newspaper for assuming. XD

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter, as usual~

Your story is amazing! I love it! I hope you update soon!

Oh, baby! At first, I thought this was an AU but youve proved me wrong! I LOVE where this is going and it only gets more intoxicating with each chapter! Oh and your midday is like my 11:00 at night...Not like thats when I checked my email but thats when i believed it showed up. Where do you live? ( So I can get the timezone and accuratly predict when your chapters show up.)

I forget that when I get on Everyones in a different timezone than you.

I'll be waiting and watching liek a hawk for chapter 5!

~Yuuko

Oh! *shivers in anticipation* Is this going to be sad like your other one? I don't know if I could handle another character death like the last one. Not that it wouldn't be well done and completely fitting but still. You made me cry. I love Axel in this fic. He reminds me of friend so much it's not even funny. She's like that right down to the zingers. It's awesome. It's like I'm reading about my friend in Axel disguise. In my head it doesn't sound as bad as it does writing it down. I love it. I'm laughing and my roomie is now awake and giving me glares. I think she may kill me. Oh, well. I'll keep checking for updates.

Oh wow .. this is getting .. creepy. Not that I've seen the matrix, but Axel's talk kinda reminded me of it. *is disturbed* i don't understand! was the shadow, like, a reflection of his inner self .. the part of him that longs to leave? and why is Axel so dodgy .. what .. i don't .. ahh ..

D so, pretty much, update soon, and enlighten me as to what is happening!

despite my confused ramblings, i really did enjoy the chapter, just as much as i enjoyed the other three, which was a lot!