Geez, Roxas. All you do is angst angst angst XD I like the whole mysterious feel you have going on here with Axel, especially the whole 'cryptic conversation that makes no sense until the end where we all go 'Of -course-!' A very nice touch, adding another dimension to this story. Now I really can't wait to see this plot unfold.

P.S. I really like the way you include aspects of the game in the story.

*grumbles in frustration* I don't know what is going on with Axel...or KAIRI *grumbles again in distaste of the stupid girl*...but I still have that bad feeling. As long as Axel & Roxas get out together and get some more smoochyface time then I'll be pleased. I'm trying to puzzle out what's going on here...and keep my hatred of Hayner to a minimum.

I LOVE YOUR WRITING! I love the way you have Axel sort of babying Roxas when he gets hurt...so cute!

Wow... This chapter was absolutely AMAZING! It was so breathtaking, that I'm out of words to describe it properly. Honest!

Good job! I know the next chapters will be as enthralling or way better... I'm deeply in love with this story!

amazing. you are probly the best writer ever. you update with great amazinness. yay!

that was so awesome. Roxie's shadow just talked to him and it was definately amazing. Axel and Roxas are so cute.

tho i am super confused... still... lol

so yes, thanks for updating with that amazing speed and thanks for writing this amazing chapter! update soon, k? i wanna kno what happens! yay! lolz!

ok... you know I love you... but I hate you right now...

*glares*

So Im not thinking drunk parents any longer, wanna know what I think?

I think foster children... that's what I think, I think foster kids, moving around a bunch, it would be a good reason for kids to come and go, people to come and go... OR witness protection or something...

They're hiding... god I hate you, I wanna know more, I NEED to know more. Axel has me hooked more then Riku did (*pets Riku* still love you sweetie) I want to dig into him like a good book, just sort of open up his head and crawl inside...

I adore him before he's so... free...

I know what Roxas is going through, god do I ever but he's dying... not in the way of, oh death, but in a manner of... his soul. Its scary when your town is all you know. My home town has a really weird way of sucking people in. It's scary to look back on the number of people who still live there, the generations of people. You get your friends, your hang outs, your girlfriend/boyfriend and it's like... nothing needs to change. I see Hayner like that... specially with the "gay for" comments. They're annoying, but sort of appropriate. Im sure that there are homosexuals in the towwn, and he doesn't mean for it to sound how it sounds... BUT... fact is, you grow up with one mind set and it sticks... I like that about this. I like that I read this and see so much I can relate to. I'll probably keep going back to this in a lot of my reviews.

I DO however, want to see how Roxas makes out, I wanna know why Axel can't stay... is he being hunted down?

yaknow, if you need someplace to hide him... RIku gets lonely when Im gone ;P

But seriously... These wonders have me curious too. Is it something other worldy, supernatural, or is the smalltown syndrome really getting to Roxas...?

When Axel went all serious too, man I got so into it. Even sorta got goosebumps. Its hard to imagine Axel serious, so that for one really got my attention, but other then that, I found myself sitting here going, 'oh hell yes!'

And he's chipping down Roxas' walls... oh Axel... seriously, brilliant.

By the by, I loved the previoous cliche... if Axel threw rocks at my window at 3 am, Im pretty sure I'd be like... hell yes and then glomp him, after of cours scolding him and then maybe groping him a little... and I think I fell asleep while writing my other review... sorry haha

much love darling

-ash

Okay, so, Hayner is an ass. XD That's the first thing I have to say. Secondly... uhm... Kairi was a surprise. I didn't expect her to be related to Axel.. I assumed she had been a resident of the town since childhood.. Yes yes, bad assumptions. *hides behind couch*

Hmm... poor Roxas. But the scene in the alley was nice~

Uhm... what else... I liked Roxas' realization at the end of the chapter. It was really... I dunno... I can't think of the word. My brain's half-dead at the moment. x_x

So... not much else. I can't wait until the next chapter, as usual~

Poor Roxas. Anyone waking you up at 3AM is not cool. Working in that toy store also has to suck… That aside, I’m curious about Axel’s parents. It’s kind of weird for him to not want to talk about his parents. Also, the English assignment sounds like it will be pretty interesting. I think its cool that you used the seven wonders of Twilight Town. Kinda sucks that they’ll have to be grouped with Roxas’ friends, though. (It’s the Hayner thing again.) I’m curious to see what happens next.

I liked this chapter (even though I can't seem to form something really clear to say about it). I feel bad for Roxas not feeling the same way about his friends and all. That type of situation can be hard on people. At least he's trying to fix it, though (kind of). I don't really like Hayner so far. Maybe its because he doesn't seem to like Axel, but something about the kid really irks me. I'm sure I'll get over it, though. Not much else to say except that I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

UGH. can suck my *. Well, if I had one anyway. Totally just reviewed and they told me to wait another 15 secs to send it. After I hadn't reviewed in what, like an hour? So, I'm rewriting. Ignore my rant. ;

Fabriffic. (It is a word, in my book. 'Course if you've never heard of it, the explanation is: the book would be by me, which means, no fame, no one would read it. Combo of fabulous and terrific, btw.) I totally adore the interactions between Hayner and Axel; they amuse me so.

The mystery behind it makes me go: "Holy * no." Only because I read your other story and it was intense. Which means this one will probably be just as intense, drama-wise. I have a couple predictions for this one, but I doubt them even being remotely right. The setting, I think, is during those six days that Roxas was "alive" in the game, right?

And Kairi ... oh man. Axel's sister? I've seen that in AU. But blah. I don't even want to guess as far as that goes.

Anyway, absolutely lovely. Keep up the good work and I'll keep reviewing.

dude *noodle* hahahhaha its all becoming clear now~ hahahha so like...Axel...and the...simulted Twilight town?

I DEFINATeLY can't wait for the next chapter. :D

SUCH ANTICIPATION~!

Hm... I wonder what's up with his parents. I have many ideas, but I have a feeling none of them will happen. Anyways! Great chapter

w00t! axel's so mysterious. lol! i really wonder what's up with that watch tho. he's so cute, going to roxie's house in the middle of the night! yay! lolz! thanks for updating so soon and update again soon, k?

dude Axel and his watch must explain hahahah but this ish definetly coming along~ - cant wait for more! *dances*

I am amazed at how you do it. I would have run out of steam by now! But, hey, I'm not complaining XD

Even though there is a huge part of me shouting 'Come -on- Roxas!' I still like the pacing of this story. Cannot wait for the next chapter, mostly because the ongoing battle between Hayner and Axel just cracks me up.