OH. MY. GOD.

Orgasmic fanfic and there hasn't even been a sex scene? Possible? Never would of thought so. Anyway. Your characterization of Roxas and Axel is the best. Ever. Seriously. Haven't seen anyone do it better on Or maybe I just like your style.

I'm thinkin' go with compliment number one. PLEASE, PLEASE, Pleasse ... continue.

I have a niggling feeling in the back of my brain that Axel's watch going off is highly significant. Can't wait to read more so update really soon ok?

Amazing what a little change can do to your life...

Roxas seems a bit calmer in this chapter then he was before. He's not all strung out and stressed, just sort of mulling things over. This chapter seems a little more about Axel, Im beginning to formulate a possible reason for Axel's weirdness.

CLearly it stems from his parents, but I dont wanna assume it's drunk something making his life hell. Maybe a single mother/father escaping a nasty divorce, they moved to get away kinda deal... I dunno, but Im eager to find out.

I have faith that it wont be cliched and over done, your last story being so unique...

See thats one of many reasons I love you. You're ideas are different and yet Im still able to feel as though I understand where you want to lead the story and we as the readers...

Axel... there's just so many things to say about him... and I love that you clarified everything... it kinda feels like I say things and then they pop up in next chapters... the Axel kissing ROxas thing for example...

He's still not denying it, or himself. He's leaving possibilities open and nearly endless without even really realizing it. I love how curious Roxas seems, like Axel has opened the door and Roxas just can't help but peek, even though he knows it might not be a good idea. The unknown is a frightening thing specially when you're from a small town. If everything is just so... you're entire life and suddenly... its not... it's a hard adjustment and I really sort of feel Roxas is lost.

sad, sad, lost little boy... and of course the best friend doesnt understand... classic..

good job all around...

oh and the window thing... a little... cliched? but it was sweet, Axels obvious need or... affinity for Roxas is touching to say the least...

much love darling...

-ash

...And the next thing we know, Axel is sitting on top of Roxas while poor little Roxie is still in bed...

R- Who let you into my house and WHY on the FUCKING green Earth must you wake me AND sit on me THIS EARLY IN THE MORNING!

A- Because I love you but the story line hasn't gotten far enough to have buttsecks...

R-...It's too early...

Yes...now that we know I'm fucking insane, I have to say this was an entertaining chapter. I didn't get the last one - which was odd - so, sorry about not commenting. When there's a story I like I tend to review every chapter. I like being there every step of the ride!

I will be watching like a hawk like always, so don't be surprised if you see a caffine-crazed girl sitting outside your window, beating on it with a yaoi paddle yelling at you to get the next chapter out...It will be my twin sister. So if you acually see her, send me a message- I'll have her out of there in a jiffy. I swear, sometimes she just gets away from me...

(gets shot, because it's customary in every review)

~Yuuko

Really awesome story! Please write more soon! I like it a lot, since there's already some AkuRokuness going on. And I hate Hayner; always have, always will. He's such a douche. *kills him* But write more! I want to see what's up with Axel's watch thingy.

D that was awesome. You say the length isn't long enough, but it seems pretty long to me. Although, i wouldn't mind however much longer you want to make it.

Hayner is still an annoying little shit. It's so unnecessary the way he abuses Axel at every opportunity. And I don't get why Axel's watch beeps, and then suddenly he has to dash off .. and what about his dodgy parents..?

Can't wait for the next chapter! D

amazing! i love axel, no matter what hayner says! lolz! update soon, k?

WHAT is going on with Axel? I am nervous, and definitely suspicious, about those stupid watch beepings...I've been trying to come up with a theory, but everything that pops into my mind seems like it'd probably turn out BAD, which isn't something I want to happen...so...I REJECT! I'll just have to wait and see what YOU have in store for our little friends...heehe

lol, loving this fic... *hugs*

especially the: "Patience is a virtue. Patience is a virtue. "Roxie" Patience is a goddamn, fucking virtue." XD that made me laugh.

*hugs again* See ya next chapter!

~Hannah

No sleep deprivation at the moment. This is a good sign. I think I can give a half-decent review this time! XD

So, Axel was a jerk waking Roxas up that early. If someone woke me up that early throwing rocks at my window, I'd probably throw something really heavy at them and go back to sleep. But that's just me. And I'm sure Axel had his reasons. Even for running off like that. Strange guy.

What next? Ah, the assignment. I couldn't help but giggle at it 'cause I recently got to re-playing Kingdom Hearts II and just got past that part in the introduction not an hour ago.

Now the toy store. The beginning to that part was pretty funny. Reminded me of the script I have for a play I'm doing for Christmas, strangely enough. What else...

I don't think I have anything more to say about this chapter! (And there was much rejoicing) This is the longest review I've left you , and quite possibly the longest review I've left in my three years on XD So, enough of my rambling. Can't wait until the next chapter!

The kiss was so cute!

I0m sure Hayner will be pissed off anyway - bringing a StRaNgEr to the Usual Spot with them? It's like Axel joining their quartet - Hayner, Pence, Olette, Roxas. It really sounds strange when you say: Axel, Hayner, Olette, Pence, Roxas. Axel just doesn't fit! I can't wait for pissed off Hayner! XD

this is gonna be a quick one, I read this on my stop over in my travels and Ive got to pick my little brother up from University and drive us... 'home'

Know what I liked best about this chapter?

How dependant on Axel, Roxas is already. I mean I was sad when Hayner was all hatin on Roxas, but you managed to turn an angsty and annoying Roxas into a, I want to change me life, holy shit... Roxas and he's seeing Axel as a ticket. The one thing about these characters, Riku Sora, Axel Roxas.. the undeniable bond you see between them. It's like, WHAM instand friend/love. Their hearts meld in a manner thats uncontrollable. It's like, ok so Roxas doesn't want to be Axel's boyfriend their -friends- but that doesn't mean he's cancelled out the idea altogether. Oh no no no.

I like that Roxas is confused, I like that Axel is his salvation, just so long as Axel's 'doctors appointment' wasn't a... Im dying of cancer and had to go in and see how far its progressed sort of trip... *glares at you*

I think we can all relate to Roxas though... are you from a small town? cause I know I am and thats exactly how it feels. Its like you get into this groove where nothing is important and you just sort of go through the motions without even realizing that you're drowning and NEED to get out. I found I was terrified of change, but once the oppertunity presented itself I jumped on that bandwagon like a crack addict on... crack.

I think we all need an Axel, someone so open minded that it ends up being hard to ignore how right they actually are. This chapter spoke to me on so many levels... cause you're friends really don't get it. They take it personally and you're left feeling unhappy AND guilty to top it all off. Good job on that, really...

Maybe Im clueless but are they in year... 11? 12? are they in their graduating year what? Cause I think that makes a big difference too.

Much love darling, Ive got a long drive a head of me... I can't help it by the way, I adore Axel!

Hmm .. why did he feel uneasy and butterflyish and kinda sick when he said that he'd try to be fun again?

0.o Hayner is really annoying .. are you trying to make him annoying, or is it some involuntary gift? Gah he's so mean to Axel. *hugs Axel and Roxas* go away, Hayner ..

Yet again, brilliance from Pence. Awh he's great.. 'we try to take over the world' *laughs* good on you ..

Hayner's such a weirdo XD I loved him in the game, and he's awesome in this fic too.

*huggles Roxas and Axel plushies* and these two just plain rule.

Oh... *grins* and I think I know where you got one of the scenes from. I've seen screenies of Axel and Roxas sitting eating ice cream on the clock tower :P

(sorry to those who didn't know... I'm a KH fanatic

-sigh- Roxas, what are we gonna do with you? I would kill to have Axel flirting with me like that XD I really love your Axel in this, especially his flirty, innuendo-laced way of talking. For me, that definitely added bonus points to him.

P.S. The last line was -classic-