Reviews for The Unfamiliar |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is FANTASTIC! I just love the way you portrayed Roxas... It's so original and realistic. You also got hold of Hayner's original character - that's great. Please update asap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to be honest. I was a bit wary going into this one after Water. (Especially after I saw angst in the genre.) I don’t have much to say at this point, though, except that I like what I’ve seen so far, and I’m pretty confident that it will be a good read. I’m looking forward to reading the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahah aw dude..this story kiinda reminds me...Land before time hahhaha um number VII i think...Stone of cold fire hahahah " Roxas ish like littlegoot and Axel ish like the rainbow faces |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful chapter, as usual~ Not much else to say. Sleep deprivation has turned my mind to mush. So, I'll go with I can't wait until the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story already! XD Not much to say about this chapter, except maybe that it's a good start. As usual, can't wait until the next chapter~ |
![]() ![]() ...*le sigh* hahahha so im a litle ways off with the first review thing but ya know haha ' i do like where this ish going tho *nods* now...is the idea of different worlds weird to them? cuz it kinda sounded like it but Roxas didnt ask many questions if there are...more than one world nayway hheheheh Axel ish such a smartass. im glad this ish about those two - they werent in...*sniffle* Water very much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, that was a fun read! Unlike other cliche transfer/moving stories ( that we all love ), I found this to be refreshing. I guess its because they delved into depression ( which is a GREAT topic for me * the sadist! lol * ) . Oh, and another outstanding feature- you use laguage above a 3rd grade level! I must say that I HATE it when every character says a line they put 'so and so SAID' SAID! I HATE THE WORD SAID! Its boring, overused and feels like mud coming off of your tongue. You used the lovely Axel we all know and love - oh, that reminds me! I really like how you used Hayner, Pence and Olette...The way they bored Roxas...I used bored lightly...I have a lack of approriate vocabulary. I cant wait for the next chapter! Please make it come SOON! NO WRITERS BLOCK FOR YOU! ~Yuuko ( who will be watching like a hawk! A HAWK!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oohh, this was a nice beginning chapter. All laughs and funs. And you even got Axel to do his 'Got it memorized' famous line! Sque! *jumps* This seems really good, so I wanna find out what happenes. Hope it's as good as water! *cant stop thinking about that fic. This morning in the shower i thought about the last chappie and started crying...thank god i was in the shower...*looks around nervously* Well then, UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was brought to my attention that I had yet to author alert you. This fic's wonderfullness has thoroughly convinced me that that was a stupid mistake. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, haha I LOVE Axel. So cute! That line was hilarious: "I like the thought of you working on me at home." Oh Axel... But maybe I should say "oh YOU!" for being such an amazing writer! AkuRoku is my favorite thing EVER, and if this story has such quick updates like Water did I'm going to be the happiest girl alive. I can't wait to read more, & good luck with your writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been waiting for this since it was mentioned that you were writing another story XD Dude, your name should be like a recommendation stamp; any story written by you should automatically be regarded as awesome. And AkuRoku? You so just made my day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok... know why I love axel? Cause when people play him correctly, he's just SO FUN! so many brilliant lines in this... ahaha I love you. I've ALWAYS had a problem with angsty Roxas though, and holy did you capture that one... Roxas is being such a little bitch in all this, but I suppose we don't know the whole story yet and that will come with time? So Sora and Riku anyone? haha You know, you have me wondering already about this. In the beginning I was like... is this where Axel and Roxas meet in highschool? and like, then they join onto Water? THen I was like no... can't be... but why does Axel seem like he knows so much about Roxas or... other worlds in general... Good job getting me hooked form the off. I can't say Ive ever been a real big fan of Roxas and as such my exposure to this pairing has been limited. Lately however I have come to terms with how adorable they actually are. Granted Roxas makes me wanna beat my head off things (some people have him TOO angsty) but I get the feeling we see a major change in him due to this lovely red haired feline boy... who I lovingly call god... I mean, what? You make me smile darling. the beginning was a little rough, though that may have been my father trying to talk to me (silly me trying to read when I come home to visit... haha) but in the end it won me over no questions asked. Though I may steal Axel from Roxas... I have a thing for tall red heads and you play him out so yummiliscious... Innuendo boy... muahaha Roxas doesn't know how lucky he has it. I feel like you have fun writing him... Axel that is, its so relaxed... like it came easy, I guess what Im saying is it just sort of flowed you know? attagirl, good job, Im glad you haven't left me... by the way - “Did I just ask him out without meaning to? Oh, hell, I hate when that happens.” He lightly slapped himself. “Bad Axel. Bad.” ONE OF THE BEST LINES EVER! ahaha aside from “I like the thought of you working on me at home.” ... can I PLEASE keep him? I'll give Riku back! haha much love darling -ash |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww Axel's like a little ray of redhaired sunshine in Roxas's life. And how could Pence ever annoy anyone? He's just so nice .. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was good lol i like the flirty axel...it was an interesting start...can't wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ya know, I think I'm getting addicted to your writing. For your weak point, it's awesome I like the weird relationship they have already, even if it's just a friendship one at the moment. Sha, awaiting teh next chapter Lauren ~Hannah |