|Reviews for The Unfamiliar|
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 34 . 6/2/2013
I like how this chapter showed what Axel and Roxas were doing while Cloud and Leon were talking. Very smart :smile:
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 33 . 6/2/2013
hahaha axel is friggin hilarious!
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 31 . 6/2/2013
Awwww why did Dem have to walk in on them?! haha
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 27 . 6/1/2013
my oh my this story is so ominous! Love it sooooo much tho
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 26 . 6/1/2013
I was wondering when Cloud and Leon would get together! Well they haven't yet but I can feel it comin' tee hee
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 25 . 6/1/2013
Awwww that was so sweet how they were so worried for each other! But I oh my goodness, Sephorith is dead? Man so many mysteries!
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 24 . 6/1/2013
HOLY CRAAAAP! OMGGG this story is soooooooooooooo friggin good! Omg I love love LOVE it. There was so much action in this chapter. It was so crazy and good! And omggg Axel touching Roxas was hawtttt. Too bad they were interrupted!
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 23 . 6/1/2013
Hahahaha omgggg this chapter was so funny! You're such a great writer. I love perverted Axel and embarassed Roxas! I love how Roxas definitely wants Axel but isn't completely ready yet. I hate when two people have sex so easily but the pace of their relationship is perfect!
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 22 . 6/1/2013
Omg...that was so crazy and unexpected! What do all those "dreams" mean? His mom wants him to destroy Twilight Town? The breaking bones thing is so eerie...
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 21 . 6/1/2013
Oooo the beginning so ominous. I love how there's always new mysteries. An the complexity of Twilight town is a reallly interesting concept. You describe the turmoil between whether they should or shouldn't be taken out really well.
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 20 . 6/1/2013
That was nice of Axel to wait until Roxas was sober. I can't wait for them to take their relationship to the next level!
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 19 . 6/1/2013
Awwww Roxas admits his feelings to Axel! :melts:
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 18 . 6/1/2013
OMGGGG I feel so bad for Axel. That was SOO embarasssing aahhhhhhhhhh!
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 16 . 6/1/2013
OMGGGG i can't believe Axel cut up Roxas so much! but you explained the necessity really well. the mention of zanarkand wanting twilight town foreshadows a climax in the story!
Roxas's sympathy kisses were ADORABLE. Like omg, def my favorite part in the whole story so far
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 15 . 6/1/2013
Awwww this chapter was cute. I love Axel and Roxas's relationship! Omg jelly Axel was hot hot hot!