Reviews for The Unfamiliar
Sora Tayuya chapter 15 . 2/26/2015
Zexion is such a boss being able to put up with hyper-Demyx.
Sora Tayuya chapter 14 . 2/26/2015
A good start, and then woah a bit game changer with an assault. Very scary. Very, very scary.

And the end...yeah. Once they started talking about war orphans, I figured the adults were programmed, and maybe some kids, but yes, it is...unfortunate Roxas had to learn about it in this way. Especially when he realized the only person who honestly loves him is a man he hasn't even decided he fully loves back, thus is just some big, super possessiveness over him. Of course, obviously Roxas likes Axel, but still, where he is right now, this is harsh stuff.

And gods dang it DiZ, there should be some sort of rule preventing kids newly out of the system from doing work like this their first week. I know it was because of Axel's mess up, but this is really ridiculous on Roxas's new body and psyche.
Sora Tayuya chapter 13 . 2/26/2015
I don't think there was a bit in this chapter I didn't about die reading, due to inhaling my cake-eating fork via laughter.
Sora Tayuya chapter 12 . 2/26/2015
Axel and fire. The clocktower rain skyscraper scene. Burn victim. Demyx's thing with water. DEMYX

Aka, all the little things I am just dying about in this story that I seriously love too much.


Ahem. I mean, oh look, it is that cool chap Luxord. Huhum.

Axel's introduction of Larxene and her response is so priceless I can't even.

Cloud and buying even more flowers, ha. And lol, Leon.

Poor Roxas with everyone picking on him! Aww
Sora Tayuya chapter 11 . 2/26/2015
I couldn't stop laughing for most of this chapter. I'm glad Roxas apologized, I hope Riku doesn't get a grudge, and I hope that he and Namine can be friends too. Then Roxas was a jerk, but I get it because I too have held 12hr intense physical labor jobs that put me so far over the edge.
Sora Tayuya chapter 10 . 2/26/2015
I thought the scene with Namine was very cute, and felt bad for her. Aw. Maybe she really did like Roxas, and I do feel Axel is being totally selfish. He really was selfish, Frick. Poor Naine, lol.

I say these things, but I can't stop laughing. Dang my sincerity.
Sora Tayuya chapter 9 . 2/26/2015
Some truth comes out, which is good. Rocas has kinda forgiven Axel, which is even better. And it appears to be still no magic and a mix of Matrix-canon KH. Neat
Sora Tayuya chapter 8 . 2/25/2015
Whoops, it wasn't Namine's fault, but Rocas is mega paranoid (with decent reason, I mean, this is a very realistic, literal piece). And dang, while it was excellent writing to have Roxas use his resources to his advantage, having Seifer wail on poor Sora just seems vicious. I'll bet Riku was the one who came over to save him, though.

But if Axel got in trouble...then why did Kairi say he was missing? If Axel hadn't been in the outside world, where has he been? Would they have killed him if he missed a deadline? Why wouldn't Sora know that? And it sounds like Namine sincerely doesn't know Axel, so are there different groups trying to get Axel out? So many questions will hopefully be answered in about 2 chapters.
Sora Tayuya chapter 7 . 2/25/2015
Namine is doing well so far - but obviously she has replaced Axel in getting Roxas out. I do hope Roxas won't get stuck in the town. Or, that when he does get out, a worse fate actually awaits him
Sora Tayuya chapter 6 . 2/25/2015
Oh man, that opening but with Seifer was a terrifying glitch. I'm wondering if this is more fake TT or Matrix (I do hope more FTT).

Axel messed it up. I'll bet everything is messed up now that he missed his deadline for being where ever it was he's needed.
Sora Tayuya chapter 5 . 2/25/2015
A brilliant, sad, amazing, sad, woah, and great chapter. And now Namine is mentioned? Interesting. And I hope Axel hadn't messed everything up by ignoring that deadline...
Sora Tayuya chapter 4 . 2/24/2015
Everything points to the obvious, but Kairi is throwing me off a bit. Unsure what's going on there.
Sora Tayuya chapter 3 . 2/24/2015
Hm, so Axel wants him to be researching the weirdness. Interesting. Also realized you are having them be in school not true summer vacation. Interesting also. And Axel's alarm must tell him when someone is detecting his presence in the program or something. Still very interested to see how this turns out.
Sora Tayuya chapter 2 . 2/22/2015
Definitely feeling the interesting vibes
Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
I missed your work on Marked and Hunted, that Zemyx fic a few summers back. No idea this one was so popular. Of course, during the KH boom, no surprise, and all your fics have high traffic, since they are well written and interesting. This one of course looks and advertises as classic school crush scenario, but enough dropped hints tells me it is probly fake TT with Axel infiltrating to get Roxas out, but more detailed than original. I do hope my premonition is correct, if only 'cuz I would enjoy this fic a lot of that ended up being the case. It is set up well for it, and would be a missed opportunity if it didn't occur. Or maybe I just am getting too attached to my own interests in this fandom, lol. Regardless, I will enjoy the rest of this fic.
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