Reviews for The Unfamiliar
Sora Tayuya chapter 8 . 2/25/2015
Whoops, it wasn't Namine's fault, but Rocas is mega paranoid (with decent reason, I mean, this is a very realistic, literal piece). And dang, while it was excellent writing to have Roxas use his resources to his advantage, having Seifer wail on poor Sora just seems vicious. I'll bet Riku was the one who came over to save him, though.

But if Axel got in trouble...then why did Kairi say he was missing? If Axel hadn't been in the outside world, where has he been? Would they have killed him if he missed a deadline? Why wouldn't Sora know that? And it sounds like Namine sincerely doesn't know Axel, so are there different groups trying to get Axel out? So many questions will hopefully be answered in about 2 chapters.
Sora Tayuya chapter 7 . 2/25/2015
Namine is doing well so far - but obviously she has replaced Axel in getting Roxas out. I do hope Roxas won't get stuck in the town. Or, that when he does get out, a worse fate actually awaits him
Sora Tayuya chapter 6 . 2/25/2015
Oh man, that opening but with Seifer was a terrifying glitch. I'm wondering if this is more fake TT or Matrix (I do hope more FTT).

Axel messed it up. I'll bet everything is messed up now that he missed his deadline for being where ever it was he's needed.
Sora Tayuya chapter 5 . 2/25/2015
A brilliant, sad, amazing, sad, woah, and great chapter. And now Namine is mentioned? Interesting. And I hope Axel hadn't messed everything up by ignoring that deadline...
Sora Tayuya chapter 4 . 2/24/2015
Everything points to the obvious, but Kairi is throwing me off a bit. Unsure what's going on there.
Sora Tayuya chapter 3 . 2/24/2015
Hm, so Axel wants him to be researching the weirdness. Interesting. Also realized you are having them be in school not true summer vacation. Interesting also. And Axel's alarm must tell him when someone is detecting his presence in the program or something. Still very interested to see how this turns out.
Sora Tayuya chapter 2 . 2/22/2015
Definitely feeling the interesting vibes
Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
I missed your work on Marked and Hunted, that Zemyx fic a few summers back. No idea this one was so popular. Of course, during the KH boom, no surprise, and all your fics have high traffic, since they are well written and interesting. This one of course looks and advertises as classic school crush scenario, but enough dropped hints tells me it is probly fake TT with Axel infiltrating to get Roxas out, but more detailed than original. I do hope my premonition is correct, if only 'cuz I would enjoy this fic a lot of that ended up being the case. It is set up well for it, and would be a missed opportunity if it didn't occur. Or maybe I just am getting too attached to my own interests in this fandom, lol. Regardless, I will enjoy the rest of this fic.
Dragonborncrystal chapter 46 . 12/30/2014
This story is absolutely amazing. I've just finished reading it and it has just blown me away! You really are an amazing author, and all I can hope is that despite the massive hiatus you might come back and complete your unfinished Kingdom Hearts fics. Please, please do. I find it hard to find stories with this level of depth and skill in this fandom, and having yours unfinished is almost a crime.

Thank you so much for finishing this one!
sparklesandskullz chapter 46 . 12/15/2014
Writing was very good and the story was REALLY interesting! Omg, I didn't see the whole Jenova thing coming lol. I loved it
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 15 . 11/27/2014
I'm happy too.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 14 . 11/27/2014
Who was that fella though...
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 13 . 11/26/2014
Jesus you're making me love cleon more than I should. :p
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 12 . 11/26/2014
Hmn. :)
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 11 . 11/26/2014
"No one will miss me." Hahah
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