Reviews for Delicate
AoyagicestHime chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
erm well... i dunno really... with this fic all you did was say the same things over and over again really... some places that was aiddferent was sweet though like the whole ''Seimeis arms was the castle and his heart was home''

it seems more like a poem, if it is then say so please also it goes under poems to.

So all in all.. if its a poem its good.. but if not... its not good.
Raze Occam chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Ho-Ho! Ne
Loveless8000 chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
you did good i love it!
LonexWolf chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
nice i like it i agree with storyofgreen you forgot to use a capital S and aslo you repeated yourself quite alot :)

nice oneshot though :D
StoryofGreen chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Loved it!

I don't have any advice It's was really pretty, and you coverd (I think) the majority of the aspects in Seimei and Ritsuka's relashionship.

A little grammer thing though, you didn't always capatilize Seimei's name.