Reviews for What Becomes of the Lonely Hearted
CheshireCatGrin3421 chapter 6 . 8/14/2008
this was a very well written and entertaining fic! i hope you update this story ASAP!
Silent Deathbringer chapter 6 . 2/27/2008
SO sweet this makes me so happy. Guess what I got my first kiss today.
DizzyDandelion chapter 6 . 2/18/2008
I think you really did do a good job on this chapter.

I like the fluff, hehe

By the way, doesn't have Vincent got any scars around his heart where the protomateria was? I mean.. Lucrecia placed it, Rosso ripped it out and Shelke put it back again...

Just a question XD
Comet Wong chapter 5 . 1/16/2008
oh...loving it...super...would it be too much to ask to update soon?
Flarire chapter 5 . 1/14/2008
hehe is can so imagine clouds face when he comes home to a kitchen full of dishes XD
Flarire chapter 4 . 1/2/2008
Aw that was so cute! Poor Denzel T_T I burt into laughter when Vincent and Zaren found out they were each others date XD i was kinda hopign itd be another disaster _ Poor Vinnie i tease him too much
DizzyDandelion chapter 3 . 12/21/2007

Lovely chapter! I'm excited to hear more about this story!
blueravenchick chapter 3 . 12/20/2007
Such a sweet cute story! I can't wait to hear about the nexy date! Update soon!
fluffball264 chapter 3 . 12/20/2007
Pinkie? ROFL!
Comet Wong chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Love this fic...update soon!
NRGburst chapter 2 . 11/22/2007
I liked it. Particularly the "red comfort blanket" line and the breakfast condom scene! "Umm, Denzel it's"

There are some spelling mistakes (SuareEnix?) but not any that made the fic really hard to read (or unintentionally hilarious).

Keep up the good work, have put this on alerts!
DizzyDandelion chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
aww! this really is cute! I hope there's coming more! :D
Lord Makura chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
i do not trustm the second one!