retarded piece of shit

The pairings except for ichihime didn't make any sense and either does some parts of the story but it wasn't a bad read and was okay.

The chapter naming theming is interesting. But don't Zanpakuto usually take a sword form before release? Ichigo's pernament Shikai is the exception, not the norm.

Speaking as someone who has read a large part of the bleach manga, Yachiru's Zanpakto in this story is only marginally weirdo than her actual Zanpakto in the manga.
Well done.

wow i really wasnt expecting the second to last part but i could never have even comprehended to last part D:

Ok. I give up. I apologize for existing. Just stop hurting my head. Please!

Awesome awesome awesome!

This was a great read

This was a funny and weird fic. But I had to laugh at the fact that that you consider Ichihime a crack pairing. Pfft , if anything Ichihime has the most chances for becoming canon at the end of this manga.

You gave Zaraki a good death, a warrior's death. this is the best one could give this character, he met his end, not at the hand of a ridiculous enemy, but a friend.

he died standing, while doing what he loved the most.

Zaraki was the second Kenpachi. The first is Unohana Retsu.

Yachiru's zanpakto has been confirmed, but this is awesome, so I'll let it slide.

That Little Red Riding Hood summary is amazing! I've never heard a better one!

XD I love this story. Poor Ichigo. And yet, strangely, his torture doesn't bother me. I wonder why...

(Is Byakuya going to show up? I feel like we can't talk about Rukia and dating for too long without him showing up and looming threateningly. Then again, I should probably read the rest of what's posted before I ask that question. .')

I think Kouryou is Zaraki reborn. Just a guess here. In which case, we're all in trouble-because a child-Zaraki Yachiru? *runs away to hide*

Very well written, really enjoyed it thank you
Peace Out
Sandaime Hokage

Those porn titles were horrible, but no more so than real ones.